just wondering but how did he have personal punches?..........just wondering for some good criticism

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he used your name like once or twice which made it towards your.........but yours coulda went towards anyone....................my voting is fucked up right now so tha votes are still tha same peep my battle with emcee abilities when he spits!

oh ok i get it.......................well it was obviously directed towards him......thanks for voting..........

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my vote goes to Tha Remix his verse was better and punches were more consistent ...they also hit harder...wordplay was iight


vote- Tha Remix

This battle wasn't worth votin on
it was obvious it was a newbe battle
But here's some advice for both of ya'll if u want success on this site
Upp the vocab a lil, and bring harder punchlines
no hate tho
~1~

I'm upping this, my first one, don't sleep on this battle, this guy has skills, and you will be reading more from him I am sure.

who me??????.......................................... 4th up................................................ ....

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Upping this for votes...tight newbie battle, you don't see many of those, let's get some votes, alright.

uppin' for my last time.............................................. ...........................................

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i would give it to tha remix better punchlines and vocab, but i cant vote could you give an honest vote on this?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=3

^^^^What she said.

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64927

pretty even battle here

both got a wayz to go but ur flo was real good at least

uh remix u lacked a lot of punchin power ur verse jus didnt hit quite as hard as rorys did actaully u didnt really have any punches jus a lot of set ups...which is not bad jus takes a lil bit of work to get tha hang of

rory won it with this
Brother, the only Remix you need is for your style,
I am the Judge and Jury, and this is your trial.
and
You wanna challenge me, Well you gotta have the crazies,
After this battle, you'll be pushing a lot of daisies.
and
When this battle ends, hopefully you'll gain a thing or two,
Like some skills and flow after your pitiful debut.

^^^punches..good shit nice battle

vote rory breaker

ok well i thought i had a lot of punches thanks for tha criticism though i need it i know........this was my first battle i think i did really good... props to rory

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