aight 15 max

no feedin
no d/r hate votes feedin no welcome

ill drop then you drop check inthen drop in the next hour-hour half dont check in if you aint gonna drop

good luck
have fun

ShOuLd Be HoT.................

yo ill spit in as soon as i can since you are going to be gonetill tommorow ill see wut comes to my mind untill then

Cy4
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ayo my bad dawg.....i didnt know u set dis shit up......i set one up to....lol.....drop soon.............................................. ........

checkin in yo .......ill drop either in the next 30 or next 2 hours cuz i gotta do it here or at home (here is at school)

Younnngg PPPP Come OUt TO PLAAAAAAY

When I'm Finished with you||doused you wet|| you'll be apart of my swollin "ReCk"
but instead like you thouth to the right, ill open you up and stick you over to the left//
Oops then again i'm wrong you see, My hard punches will keep on a roll
turns out you won't be a win, shi you'll be another K.O.!!//
next time you better pick a topic, so that when you waver ill spot it
wont matter wut you spit, cuz ill turn it around and make it fit
my rap bomb will be a comin, like a devil is to sin
It will blow' n 'explode in ya face and catch you stallin
like you in love with this gurl but you caught her lover callin//
your "YOUNGPersiverence won't save you for nothing, ill fill it with grey matter
the spit i douse your fire with, will make you look like a black n white movie, shit
you be in there cuz the truth is, there was no black there just Whit's and Semi'Whits' Wit it//

Finish You out....

boy || my bibical scriptures tore you out like pirites, rippin through you was like "Blue Light Special" "lCLEARD IT|"
So recap my spit and youll fear it, who fucked up the executives:: SPIRIT ::

Just A Toy To Play With......

the finisher
i forgot to right about the pirates rippin out bible pages and givin it to the crew mates that they wanted dead with a black dot on it or a big black dot i mean

good luck upppin for young p

uppin for young p get in here and spit
spit you spit spit spit
better spit already
spit please
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PeAcE..............

good shit spirit ill vote when dey drop....one....................................... .................................

aight thanxim just uppin for young p i dont wanna no show votes or shit and im surehe doesnt either so YOUNG P

IM UPPPPPPPPPPPPPIN FOr YA

aight yo....like i promised i'll be spittin tonite....not rite now cuz i have to go paint graffiti dat i did...but real soon.....sry about takin so long.....been have sum PO PO problems.....drop soon (hopefully)

~Douse-me~? Bitch, try it...I got da ~tendency~ of ~non-stop-burning~//
I must be a ~DJ~ da way my rhymes ~got-da-tables-turnin~//
Please, u aint ~“super,-man”~ u betta ~“jet son”~, u and ya crew ~tryna-be-heros~// (cartoons)
Let dis kid ~swallow-his-pride~, and i’ll ~gank-his-spirit~, and leave him wit ~ZEROS~//
Someone should ~file-abuse-charges~ cuz dis ~kid’s-bein-beat~//
I’m like a ~furnice~, cuz already on ~da-sixth-line~ u can ~feel-my-heat~//
I’m ~hungry~, ~spirit’s-full~ cuz u know ~he-dun-bit~//
My ~septic-tank~ must be on ~fire~ da way I ~spit-hot-shit~//
~Prewritten-shit~ dawg, dat aint ~wut-im-spittin,-shit~, ~makin-hits~//
He stuck ~rakin-dicks~, ~hatin-tits~, u know dis nigga ~aint-into-clits~//
~Bakin-bitches~ dats wut im doin, ~less-den-13-linez~//
~Lyrically-tare-his-pussy-apart~, finishin him off wit ~my-punchlinez~//

change your shit i said no feeding in the rulz so dont pull that

Reference: first line.....cmon boy

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yo good battle both had some ill shit........
i like that last line by spirit.....that was tight...but then young p had some ill shit...he had metaphors rhymes...and word play
vote=young p...


hey can ya go check out my battle the link is at the buttom

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