Rules::
8-10 lines
5 votes wins
no hate/dr votes
spit right now.....

Iight Somthin Short...

Kid Saw My Verse And 'Fleed' Like He Was On Vacation, His Mom Saw That He Was Lookin At Illness So She Called For An Evacuation:::
I Turned Into A Pissed Off Hulk And He Still Didnt See-Me, Why U On Ur Knees Whorshiping Me Thats No Way To Treat-Me:::
Kid Thought He Was 'Fast' But He Couldnt Put The 'HighWay' Through-Me, Even If U Were R.Kelly Theres No Way u Could Abuse-Me:::
Why Dont U Take A Picture Of Me Cuz Thats The Only Way U Intake Illness, U Need To Go To 'Sex Ed' Cuz If I Was A 'Bannana' U Wouldnt Know How To Peel-This:::
Im Shredding Ya Life And Ya Wonderin What Im Doin, U R Seriously Lyrically Challenged But I Dont No What U Need To Start Usin:::

Done

im goin to edit it for spelling and i need to space...forgot
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wheres this bitch at?
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checking in, remember I told you yesterday that tommorow
would be the day we battle 4:00-4:30, remeber my time where
I was last night.?? as soon as I pm'd you with that I logged out..
(sorry for any miss understanding)

Anyway what happened to my 12 to 14 lines rule...?

And the NO CREW
NO RECYCLING

Ill be waiting right here for a reply..
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dope verse, ill come vote when ya done,,,,,,,, peep ma battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66349 thanks

never mind im puttin my 14 lines like I stated before...

Ya lines are pretty much all horrible, pathetic, you REEK/
You need the power of FRESH SCENT like a GLADES PLUG in to
stop the stink/
Your style is edible and your shit aint delicious/
I'll consume ya leftovers cause I HUNGER for competition/
Your beyond the help of Wackness Emergency Center/
Ya better off getting hot in herre laced in Nelly's leather/
Feelin lost and forgotton like Whos The Boss?/ (sitcom,show)
The last humid thing to come out of the South was Louisiana
Hot Sauce/
Ya occupation is student , cause you far from LEARNING the ways
of a MASTER/
Leave this grasshoppers White Belt blood stained so he can
remember the answer/
BE KIND AND REWIND my rhymes for intelligent minds/
I should charge a LATE FEE cause you fail to RETURN In the LINES/
You comin with punches but im coming with BLOCK BUSTER ability/
Your just another RENTAL only viewed temporarily......

all yall reading my text just remember its grasshopper's(with an s)

Uppin for honest, intelligent, explained votes...

One

u went over the line limit......but o well....uppin/..
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ok ok dis was tight kinda like da battle of da master n under dawg,,, southern u came short n basic, their was nothin in yo verse that really stood out na mean, i was lookin to read somin that maybe wouldent get a laugth or a OOHHHH but just a smile, failed, flow was off but hey dis is a battle n fuck flow, ya best bar was da r kelly bar..

stealth ya shit was ok again no flow, wordplay was basic n the 1st 2 lines could kill u in many emcees eyes they where pure whackness fosure, HOWEVER id did get better n culminated in these bars----I should charge a LATE FEE cause you fail to RETURN In the LINES/
You comin with punches but im coming with BLOCK BUSTER ability/
Your just another RENTAL only viewed temporarily......

specially those last 2 and the way u constructed the 1st to lead into the last, IMO thats what took dis battle.

vote= stealth (just)

iight............he got 6 extra lines tham me....but nice drop...went over the line limit..but no hate....i didnt think it would take much...

yeah but you ignored MY rules that YOU agreed to...

So whats up with that changing shit at the last minute...

and I only have 4 more lines than you remeber my rule
12-14

I have 14 you have 10??
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