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Xceltiz 2 28.57%
Tha ReaLiTY 5 71.43%
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Old 07-19-03, 11:44 AM   #16
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Originally posted by Game
what you 2 guys talking about its fucking n00bs voting look at this wack verse Crime scene labelled with Police-Tape, listen bitch, im first-class, your second-rate, ya so ugly ya cudnt even get a date//9

it makes no sense no worldplay out of line punches

this was quailty SMASH-THIS-HATER...no OPPOSIN' my POTENT FLOWS-KID...leave you DOSIN' in some
random O-CEAN//7
you rhmyes RUSTY like CORROSION...at least matchin' the COLOR of your BROKIN'
yo xceltiz im gonna pm you im thinking about making a new crew

xceltiz=vote for good worldplay that made sense


non of his rhymes where good in my eyes
 
Old 07-19-03, 11:45 AM   #17
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Originally posted by Tha ReaLiTY
This kids Ducking ma Sick lines, switch tha "S" and "D" and this bitch is Sucking Dick 7 times//1
Couldn't "structure" a spit if ya had a Ph.D in "craft & design", kid cant even get into W.E.C, so he phones tha hot-line//2(W.E.C = Wackness Emergency Centre)
Nice line

Ya names only famous as it struck tha Fox News HeadLine - Only punches ya got is tha ones i shot that left an outline//3
Kid obviously didn't see my Warning Sign, "Stay clear or be homed in a permanent Shrine", your defeated, just resign//4
Lmao , like this one

Ama merk you at a glace, ya probably "pissin-ya-pants" knowin that ya losin even tho you got given tha chance//5
This battles to tha Last one ta stand, am gettin pussy, but yo ugly ass still makin love to ya hand//6
was ok

this battles a combat zone, and ama full-blown killer, crush yo poor ass wit ma wallet leavin you in a cold sweat//7
dont get upset, bad enuf yo bitch all wet, had to sort her problem wit a single player version of russian roulette//8
didnt like this one

Crime scene labelled with Police-Tape, listen bitch, im first-class, your second-rate, ya so ugly ya cudnt even get a date//9
Noone left to penetrate, get a fag play-mate, anally investigate, all your rhymes translate into one line "i need to elevate"//10

nice , wordplay.........and structure



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i'mma nice guy, but you talk-shit then I DROP-HITS with HOTNESS like ROCKETS//1
This little kid....Fucking 'SENSELESS' like Ripped POCKETS//2
Rockets and pockets whatver this is wack

My smallest RIPPLES will RIP-HOLES leavin' ya FACE with extra DIMPLES//3
just SYMBOLS of how SIMPLE I could leave you CRIPPLED//4
erm yeah westside!.....wtf didnt get this one didnt like it either

Stronger GRIP-HOLD then PITBULLS...pop you like PIMPLES//5
your RHYMES all GIGGLES...MINES harder than bitch tit NIPPLES//6
Yeah wheres the rhyme?....well bad choice of words....

SMASH-THIS-HATER...no OPPOSIN' my POTENT FLOWS-KID...leave you DOSIN' in some
random O-CEAN//7
you rhmyes RUSTY like CORROSION...at least matchin' the COLOR of your BROKIN'
NOSE-THEN//8
aha there little try....was kinda ok

That's ok cause I RIP-FAGS and the GUN-IS-LOAED, so if your gonna SPIT-RAP
invest in a tictac//9
cause I think SHOULD-KNOW 40 minutes AGO ur dad called...he wants you to give his
fucking DICK-BACK//10
Well i couldnt get the sence outha this one tho....


Vote-Reality why damn better overal thing mades sence ....not a very good battle........but real had some nice punches to tho so he gets my vote
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Old 07-19-03, 11:47 AM   #18
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man game u have issues as if you hate real or something more real votes and comments plz............................................... .................................................. ......................
 
Old 07-19-03, 11:56 AM   #19
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Lol a dont even know game, but yo woteva dawg lol, was fair battle i thought, lookin for some vets to vote here or someat............
peace.
 
Old 07-19-03, 12:11 PM   #20
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i'mma nice guy, but you talk-shit then I DROP-HITS with HOTNESS like ROCKETS//1
This little kid....Fucking 'SENSELESS' like Ripped POCKETS//2
senseless liked ripped pockets.. pure fucking filler there.

My smallest RIPPLES will RIP-HOLES leavin' ya FACE with extra DIMPLES//3
just SYMBOLS of how SIMPLE I could leave you CRIPPLED//4
slightly better, gay with the whole caps with your punches, herb tactikz.

Stronger GRIP-HOLD then PITBULLS...pop you like PIMPLES//5
your RHYMES all GIGGLES...MINES harder than bitch tit NIPPLES//6
this bar was pretty wack, your rhymes all giggles, thats some soft ass shit there.

SMASH-THIS-HATER...no OPPOSIN' my POTENT FLOWS-KID...leave you DOSIN' in some
random O-CEAN//7
you rhmyes RUSTY like CORROSION...at least matchin' the COLOR of your BROKIN'
NOSE-THEN//8
this was tight, much better than last 3 bars.

That's ok cause I RIP-FAGS and the GUN-IS-LOAED, so if your gonna SPIT-RAP
invest in a tictac//9
cause I think SHOULD-KNOW 40 minutes AGO ur dad called...he wants you to give his
fucking DICK-BACK//10
First line, fucking lame, specially the tictac thing, very poor.. Second line even wacker, elevate.

Now realitys verse
This kids Ducking ma Sick lines, switch tha "S" and "D" and this bitch is Sucking Dick 7 times//1
Couldn't "structure" a spit if ya had a Ph.D in "craft & design", kid cant even get into W.E.C, so he phones tha hot-line//2(W.E.C = Wackness Emergency Centre)
first line is played, second is hot, nice with the hotline thing... but good meta at beginning of second line, donno if peeps wud understand tho..

Ya names only famous as it struck tha Fox News HeadLine - Only punches ya got is tha ones i shot that left an outline//3
Kid obviously didn't see my Warning Sign, "Stay clear or be homed in a permanent Shrine", your defeated, just resign//4
this was good, nice multis, the shrine thing was tight too... wuda been better as a finisher tho with the whole resign shit..

Ama merk you at a glace, ya probably "pissin-ya-pants" knowin that ya losin even tho you got given tha chance//5
This battles to tha Last one ta stand, am gettin pussy, but yo ugly ass still makin love to ya hand//6
makin love to ya hand... lol, good, played, but funny...

this battles a combat zone, and ama full-blown killer, crush yo poor ass wit ma wallet leavin you in a cold sweat//7
dont get upset, bad enuf yo bitch all wet, had to sort her problem wit a single player version of russian roulette//8
not too keen on this one, second line weak with the bitch all wet shit..

Crime scene labelled with Police-Tape, listen bitch, im first-class, your second-rate, ya so ugly ya cudnt even get a date//9
Noone left to penetrate, get a fag play-mate, anally investigate, all your rhymes translate into one line "i need to elevate"//10
first line week.. second line very nice... nice finisher.

After that major breakdown, ama go with reality, was consistant with punches, all made sense really, good multis and metas.... xceltiz lacked the strong punches, had better multis but lacked other variables.
vote: reality.
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Old 07-19-03, 01:05 PM   #21
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this was tuff but reality cam stronger to me
xceltiz had some hard punches but i feel that The Reality was more consistant with his word play,
much respect to both and please hit up my thread
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