6-12 bars (12-24 lines)
no biting
no dickriding, crew or unexplained votes
no swaying
no freeposting
Spit 30mins after check in(I added this one in)


You spit first dawg.

checkin the fuck in - i'll go write my verse right now then post it as soon as i can...30 minutes might be too little time, i'll have it in within the hour definitely.

aight dat's cool wit me.................since you just startin out..............................................g ood luck wit it.

yo Flatline.........if you can......try ta drop ya verse as soon as possible cuz I might have ta go soon...................and I wanna be able ta spit mine too............aight?

Sorry i'm a little late...here's my verse:



Flatline vs. C-man...I guess this brawl is certain/
but you already know your 'Ass' is Unsafe, Like Prison Showers without Walls-or-Curtains//

You say you spit hot? Ya may be 'cursed' cuz ya fail to burn sparks/
I'll leave this nigga's chest 'caved in' worse than 'Dale Earnhart's'//

I'll wreck spells (Caps), drop ya keyboard cuz you didn't elevate, ya text fell/
Next? Well, Skills? You're simply “not producing” like your “Sex Cells”//

He says he can spit, but watch this liar perspire as I bring the fire/
Primed to 'cook' this tired 'cat' like I was a 'Chinese chef' for hire// (chinese chefs...rumoured to cook dogs, cats etc...)

Veins Elude And Become Divisible, Exhaust Ya Cause And Have To Exort In Minimal//
Ya Ports Are Cynical, But This dude's “plays” Always Gets “Pissed On”, Like Cups In “Sport Phsyicals”//

Cut ya flight, this kid will have no Air-lines to stand one/
C-man? Nobody's “Feeling” your “Flow’, like an unused tampon//

You can't match my lines, I got more than graph paper/
The closest you'll ever get to fire's a tour at match makers/
You the core of ass rapers, guys sayin' "thanks for hittin all the spots"/
I'll destroy ya dreams and have the remains mailed to ya 'box'/(mailbox)

You got all of your shit messed up like 'buyin' rentals'/
My rhymes'll burn you so bad they have to identify you by ya dentals//

Knowin' you, chances are my lines already got you confused/
perplexed when i flex, like color blind kids playin wit rubix-cubes//

My punches hit so hard I'll have this lame sailin' when I knock/
Just a matter of time before I have the respect of the game like Pac//






There it is man...11 bars...good luck.

for some reason i can't edit my posts...anyway on my first line i meant C-mac, not C-man...everything else looks right, i'm lookin' forward to seeing you spit.

nice verse........................................I'll drop mine in a few.aight?........................................ ........................................

yeah no prob man, whenever you're ready go ahead and spit, just try to get it in before tomorrow.......................................... ...........................

if you guys hit an honest vote on this ill hit this..................honestly.................... ......

oops ya the link is here...........................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=66842

Here's mine...............

Listen;

Me vs. Flatline? Shit, his name dun ^said-it-all^,
Cuz even b4 the results of the battle are in, his heart-rate takes a ^drastic-fall^!
I'll finish dis herb wit ease, even he had nuthin' but ^d/r-votes^,
Cuz a rookie like him could never stand up ta my ^slick-rhymin'-notes^!
U shouldn't have accepted my challenge, it sucks your first ^stat'll-be-a-loss^,
But face the facts, ur just an amateur, wit ^crap-dat-should-be-tossed^!
B4 he could ^rap-he-already-lost^,
U like any defender against "Skip", is bound dis ^lad'll-get-crossed^!(Skip To My Lou)
Dis yo first battle, so let me tell you why u gon' ^die-son^,
Cuz u could never dodge my bullets, all I carry is ^wide-gunz^,
I spit so much heat, I got enough left over ta ^provide-the-sun^,
U just another pussy who's gon' be on the run, "Someone please call ^911^"
My style is way above yours, so buddy, how'd u think u was ^gonna-win^?
You'd need more then a "carsonjet", ta get 10 miles ^within^!
Ur freestyle is below the bar where you could find ^rookies-at^,
Dis herb should be writing songs for R.Kelly wit his ^'cookie'-rap^!
Fuck wit me and get spirit broke, along wit ya ^collar-cracked^,
Not ta change the subject or nuthin'...but tell your mom I want my ^dollar-back^!
Flatline please, take my advice and ^bag-your-shit^,
N' while your at it, tell yo mom ta bag her ^saggy-clit^!
Fuck tryin' ta win wit your damn ^lyin'-wordz^,
They may hate you here, but druggies must luv dis ^giant-herb^!

good verse............................................v oting time, let's get some action here.............................................. ...................................

Flatline alot of your lines were played along time ago, you need to work on that

~c-mac, your shit doesnt make since at all, and you need to drop those ^and ' cause it throws off the flow. and through alot of your verse your rapping about how dope you are, instead of dissing him.

seriously WTF is this?

U just another pussy who's gon' be on the run, "Someone please call ^911^"
My style is way above yours, so buddy, how'd u think u was ^gonna-win^?
You'd need more then a "carsonjet", ta get 10 miles ^within^!
Ur freestyle is below the bar where you could find ^rookies-at^,
Dis herb should be writing songs for R.Kelly wit his ^'cookie'-rap^!

^thats one of the gayest things i have ever seen in a battle. it gave me a headache

i vote for flatline, alot of his verses were played but they were better then ~c-mac's lines.

vote= flatline

1-0, my lead at this point.....

i agree some of my lines are played out, just about anything involving 'faggots' or gays is....

let's get some more votes............................................. ...