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07-21-03, 06:23 AM | #1 | ||||||
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one and only (for the real poets)
IP: B681 7583
*the one and only*
I am something you will never see I am something you will never be u r somethin i love, & its killing me lifes fallin down the drain all pain next time you see me ill be laying i left a note saying: I love you, everyday i wish to hug you, but u bared my soul to everyone, and i thought it was goin good i was havin fun, now i got my gun now im trigger happy havin fun, ill promise you i will always love you and take care of you, from down below, livin in a dark hell hole, u din care my heart was used by use as a spare, and it din take long b4 it blew, i wanted to cry cuz i din know what to do, id do nething just for you...... I love you but now i was pushed to far and im laughin listen to me write my foots tappen, im scared there sides to you that a layerd god how i cared unloading my clip into myself blood shootin onto my shelf i hope ur happy now, just one ? how............................................... ......................... |
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07-30-03, 01:51 PM | #2 | ||||||
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it was good i liked it vocab was simple got to the point n stayed there the content was good flow was koo t colda used more in it but all in all sall a good drop
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07-30-03, 05:57 PM | #3 | ||||||
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thanx dawg...........
uppin for some feed in here |
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