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Old 07-21-03, 08:56 PM   #1
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Dont Worry Dad : GoD Song

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its okay daddy
you dont gotta lie no more
everyone has moved on
we dont have to cry no more

me and my baby sisters man
i swear we doin okay
dont worry bout it poppi
i look out for them everyday

i wouldnt let nothin
bad happen to either of them
we hurtin from the past
and dont want to go through it again

dont blame yourself
i know i didnt make it that easy
out late every night
all i really cared about was me

i could never tell you like me
since 6 years old
you always try to fight me
made my heart turn cold

expressing your feelings?
you cant say that you did a good job
a young boy with no love
makes growin up hard

so i looked to the thugs n drugs
to get that attention
that you never gave me
its like you never would listen

just you and my mother
sit me down in the livin room
tell me how stupid i am
these thoughts i cant consume

i know im better then that
stop makin me feel so bad
im a young man growin up
im not supposed to feel sad

***@***chorus
dont worry now daddy
everythings good
we no longer in the struggle
and we got out of the hood

just live your life happy
and dont worry bout me
move on, forget the past
just know we still a family
***@***

wow it really happened
never thought that it would
you and my mother breakin up
i never thought you could

you just always talk about it
when you fight every night
you always seem to fix
make everything alright

but when she packed her bags
i prepare to miss my mom
i cant believe she asked me
to check the car for a bomb

i thought she was joking
but she looked in my eye
said she think pops trynna kill her
inside i started to cry

i cant believe this is real
is this all that its become?
i know things get rough
what happened to my home?

sisters already gone
and now my momma's gonna leave
its just me and my pops
hope i dont screw this life that i lead

i started off bad
now imma try and make right
senior year of high school
me and my daddy had a fight

so i left with my friend
spent the night at is place
then early in the mornin
his momma woke me with a look on her face

like someone had died
and i knew it was for me
she handed me the phone
it was pops cryn to me

he told me the house is on fire
you need to get here fast
i dont think they can save it
not much longer it can last

my heart sank
i felt like there was nothing left
but that was a long time ago daddy
just let it off your chest

***@***chorus
dont worry now daddy
everythings good
we no longer in the struggle
and we got out of the hood

just live your life happy
and dont worry bout me
move on, forget the past
just know we still a family
***@***
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Old 07-22-03, 05:35 PM   #2
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y0 no one read it?!?!

^^^ just playin
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Old 07-23-03, 03:15 AM   #3
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i read it and the reason you got no replys is because it was dope and the common herbs on rb arnt fammilar to that so they sont reply.............man i could relate to that it was really good...............nice story i really enjoyed that..............nice emotion through out the song keep it up.............................DOPE PEICE KEEP IT UP.....................
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Old 07-23-03, 03:18 AM   #4
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it wasn't that good at all...
you did better than most of the
herbs here, you had nice emotion
the content was nice, your flow
was as elementary as tray lunches.
sounded like you were on some
5th grade name poem type shit.
keep up the content, learn how to
use an actual scheme not limerick
steez. keep elevating. and pz
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