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Old 07-22-03, 02:40 PM   #1
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ayo....you fuckin wish we were gay,
so you could dream about fuckin us everyday,
i talk tough on the net, you do it too,
and if you saw me, i'd probly kick the fuck out of you,
face it, your not a rapper never will be
what was your rhyme about tell me...
you called me gay and whack
fuck how long it take for that
you say your gonna "pop" my family with your gun
i'm sure your got a big one too, so i'm sure i'll run
i'm not to worried about this dumb fuck
cause he'll leave as soon as he realizes he sucks

you scared ya pussy, scared of what i'll say
oh no dawgs i think he called me gay
what will i do what will i say
this fucker ain't got no skills to display
so here i go here i go
time to spit my next flow

this is verse number 2 against this fool
your fuckin dumb go back to school
you wright one verse and i wright 2
i wright more cause i'm better then you
my mom's a slut i know she's a whore
say somethin i don't know, somethin that don't bore
and i don't have a sister you unlyrical retard
but if i did and you said that shit, you'd be hung in my back yard
when i read your little gay ass post i lied i didn't
cause i knew there was zero skill that was in it

you started this shit bitch....
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Old 07-22-03, 02:47 PM   #2
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that was kinda weak

elevate ur skills

u have nice potential u just don't know how to use it

u'll elevate
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Old 07-22-03, 03:15 PM   #3
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that was kinda weak

elevate ur skills

u have nice potential u just don't know how to use it

u'll elevate


Kinda weak?... he means REALLY weak.. sorry, wasn't feelin' it at all, you got flow, but that's about it.. your vocab is how do you say... ummm, ELEMENTARY.. lol, there was no wordplay.. or multi's... keep try'n but just remember this was wack, so don't make something like this again.. you'll get it eventually, I used to be worse than that..
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Old 07-22-03, 04:05 PM   #4
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I agree

this was weak
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Old 07-23-03, 02:45 AM   #5
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old krems always been weak
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Old 07-23-03, 02:48 AM   #6
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he tried to battle me in the old days with his like 4 letter punchlines
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Old 07-23-03, 02:49 AM   #7
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weak........................
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Old 07-23-03, 03:32 AM   #8
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^ the fuck treach...that doesn't fly ^


this was horribly gay, you opened it up
with some gayness about gayness how
fucking gay is that? your flow wasn't even
elementary, it was new born kid...the
loud annoying cries of a bloody premature
male baby pissing on the doctor have more
rhythm in the sounds than this shit. omg...
your content...what content? i could rap
gibberish better than this garbage...blah
you fucking suck...elevate


and btw, who are you talking about?


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Old 07-23-03, 04:11 AM   #9
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Basically In Lamens Terms ..






























































Your Wack.
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Old 07-23-03, 04:45 AM   #10
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^ the fuck treach...that doesn't fly ^


this was horribly gay, you opened it up
with some gayness about gayness how
fucking gay is that? your flow wasn't even
elementary, it was new born kid...the
loud annoying cries of a bloody premature
male baby pissing on the doctor have more
rhythm in the sounds than this shit. omg...
your content...what content? i could rap
gibberish better than this garbage...blah
you fucking suck...elevate


and btw, who are you talking about?


0/10


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Old 07-23-03, 07:49 AM   #11
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I Can't Be Bothered To Break This Shit Down - It's Not Worth It, Sorry Dawg.

Get Of The Gayness Disses, Move ONto Something More Complex n' Original. You've Been Here Since Dec 2002, Surely You MUst've Picked Up Some Tips Or Whatever!
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Old 07-23-03, 05:36 PM   #12
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and treach we never battled, remember you never showed up
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Old 07-29-03, 02:49 AM   #13
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yeah because your bitch asss aint even worthy of a merkin
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Old 07-29-03, 12:40 PM   #14
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Yeah i gotta kind of go with the rest you need work with this one son it was a bit whack!
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Old 07-29-03, 02:21 PM   #15
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its whack, its nothin new, and u need to elevate and if your dissin somebody tell us who it is.
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