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Street Cancer...peep Dis....
IP: 6236 079F
[Chorus]
They don't really wanna learn - well start gunnin 'em down! Yo they really ain't concerned - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't wanna get the book - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't want a conscious hook - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't wanna pay dues - well start gunnin 'em down! They be actin brand new - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't wanna get the light - well start gunnin 'em down! Yo, pass me the mic - we'll start gunnin 'em down I sling a poisonous pistol,you dont want my venom to stick you/ once I get in you,I spread like cancer thru ya tissue/ Im official-dont make my headhunters come to get you/ jus take it as an honor if I diss you,dis is da issue/ I'll rip you-so ya'll can suck da dick dat I piss thru/ I seen how ya click do,makin nothin but bitch moves/ dont you speak on dis gangsta til you walked in his shoes/ I come to ya corner n run up on ya,off ya neck I lift jewels/ run you niggas for ya sneakers cuz I spot you like cheetahs/ remove you from ya adidas,nikes or filas/ all ya ice and ya beepers leavin wit me,findas keepas/ you betta find a heater before you come back around to re-up/ I burn like gonnorhea-all you niggas is just bottom feeders/ catch u in a chase after you stop for breathers/ so hot we runnin fevers-bustin thermometers ominous/ either ride wit us or get dragged from behind da bus/ [Chorus] They don't really wanna learn - well start gunnin 'em down! Yo they really ain't concerned - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't wanna get the book - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't want a conscious hook - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't wanna pay dues - well start gunnin 'em down! They be actin brand new - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't wanna get the light - well start gunnin 'em down! Yo, pass me the mic - we'll start gunnin 'em down dont come into a fight and try to pull a knife cuz I might/ pull a gun out like Iverson lookin for his wife/ precise-da way I move like Lamborghini Diablo/ showtime at the apollo duckin Harlem 5-0/ Im pyro-hot n explode like fireworks/ sling gun like Wyatt Earp disturbin da quiet earth/ wit automatic fire weapon 4 hire steppin beside ya/ niggas cant relax while dey trapped in da web of da spider/ put burn to my lighter-while I spark up a conflict/ kingdom of mayhem reighning exhaulted in da projects/ take it outta context-or take it for what its worth/ Im quenchin my blood thirst appetizers come first/ ya crew is da main course ya block becomes dessert/ punch time cards, while I put in work on my turf/ da rugged-sheisty murderer dat u dont wanna fuck wit/ you dont wanna get abducted n getcha lungs punctured/ [Chorus] They don't really wanna learn - well start gunnin 'em down! Yo they really ain't concerned - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't wanna get the book - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't want a conscious hook - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't wanna pay dues - well start gunnin 'em down! They be actin brand new - well start gunnin 'em down! They don't wanna get the light - well start gunnin 'em down! Yo, pass me the mic - we'll start gunnin 'em down |
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[ - Here's Ya Fucking Crit - ]
IP: 8DAE FC69
Yo...
Dogg, From Tha Hook To The Verses This Shit Waz Fuckin NICE!!! Had Some Multiz In There And Made The Shit Flow Almost Perfect...I Bet If You Found The Right Beat This Would Be A Sikk Fuckin Audio Mayne...Damn Had Alotta Quotable Linez So I Aint Gonna Try It...Get At Me Jo, You Got AIM or Yahoo or MSN?? Lemme Know...B-EaZy...uNo...PeaCe PeaCe "I sling a poisonous pistol,you dont want my venom to stick you/ once I get in you,I spread like cancer thru ya tissue/ " That Had Me Like....Oh Shit, This Guy Nice...Get At Me Doe...-1- |
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IP: CC07 EC19
wow, 1st thing that come in my mind was - onyx - dont ask why, you got potential and kinda reminded my of the old skewl
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IP: 5511 29C6
Rhyming/Flow
Was Dope, I Was feelin It All the Way Through, You had Mad Multi's n' Inter Rhyming. Don't See It Much By erbs - You've Rapped before Then..lol...7/10 Vocab/Wordplay Lacked This, Again I'll Say About abbv. Word, "U" etc... I feel It Gives it A UnProfessional Kinda Look To It. Word On Your Vocab mod.def, Thats What Takes Songs From o.k - Ill!..6/10 Concept/Topic I Don't Really Go With Gangsta Topics, I Prefare Tghe more Heart-Felt, Emotional Shit - But Your kNow What Your Talking About.Alott Herbs Have 4 bar Pieces About Killin' n' Rapin' etc.. You had Some Emotion In there! 7/10 Overall 6/10, Highest I've Ever Rated A Gangsta Piece..lol..We Should Collab Up Some Time, Pm me...Keep Writin, You have Killa Potential! Word! |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
big up's for tha feedback ya'll.....yo im down for a collab or sumthin.....just holla at me and let me know when....i got aol....so hit me up and let me know holla......
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IP: 85F1 B9FF
This was def nice....It was kinda repetitive at some points but you got some skills.....stay up homie...and keep doin ya thang and you will elevate no doubt in my mind whtsoever.
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