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Old 07-25-03, 05:56 PM   #1
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Nice Check it out

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ima spit somthin give ah nigga so feed back ya know

LOOK LOOK

When i flow/its like whoa/goin fast or slow/ ima pro/cut off the lights and watch ah true freshman glow/ma doe/is longer then ah mother fuckin oprah song/tell ya girl im right even though i be dead wrong/ get ah few hollow tips and play ah game of ping pong/ah nuff height ta fight nutts bigger then king kong/ every dauther i make look somthin like Nia Long/unless her mama name somethin like Panellape Wong/ a jack im from the south/pourin ajax in ya mouth/ black nigga with clout/pumpin hollows in ya snout/plus i made ya bitch shout/now she know what im about/that why her lips pokin out/like ah salt water trout/don't pout bitch we just so gutta gutta bound/why the fuck you think they call dis type ah music under ground/cuz we dirt divers dick big boss banger/type ah nigga that ah rap but only fuck singers/keep bitches at ma house in the closet on hangers/tackle pussy so much ma dick start catchin stingers/bitches call me so much i start turnin off ma ringers/havin niggaz runnin coners like some all state flankers.

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Old 07-25-03, 06:08 PM   #2
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[ - Here's Ya Crit - ]

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Iight Homie, I Aint Hatin Or nOthin Cuz I Dont Even Fuckin Know You But Peep...Ya Linez Waz Too Simple -N- Shit On Tha Real, And Some Linez Was Real Short And Others Ran On -N- On...Try -N- Make Ya Linez About The Same Length And Not So Run On So That Way Tha Flow Is There Nah Mean?? Try Throwin In Some Multiz, Metaz, And Punchlinez, And Shit Like That 2...Get Creative Wit Some Shit...If You Need Any Help Send Me A Message Or AIM Me At...

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B-EaZy...And Keep Spittin...uNo...PeaCe PeaCe...
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Old 07-25-03, 06:52 PM   #3
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good lookin out on the feed back pimpin but i feel that i can bust yo ass any day in ah battle so if you wanna get down pm me and let me know and ima set it up pimpin
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Old 07-25-03, 07:07 PM   #4
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^^^^^i agree with with bulletprewf, but dont pm me, ill phuk ya world up with my philsophy
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Old 07-25-03, 11:02 PM   #5
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I agree with them you need to work on yo skills a lil but it was still pretty good for the most part....just keep spittin and you will elevate.
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Old 07-26-03, 03:51 AM   #6
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what cuz i ant usein them stupid ass big words yall not feelin it thats crazy
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Old 07-26-03, 02:37 PM   #7
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just look for me in my next battle i know what you are lookin for and i have it trust me im just down south gutta ya all around the world and shit
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