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Old 07-25-03, 11:53 PM   #1
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Purified Needle

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He said "all unholy gets thrown into the lake to burn/
turn ya life around for me hurry you must make the turn/
all i try to do is give to you the greatest things to learn/
otherwise your tampering with death like shakin urns"/

i cracked the code, used DNA to entact the ghost/
of the greatest prophet n' offered to let his facts unfold/
unfalable, 20 seconds he aged "20 calandars"/
turned around and knew Apacolypse would attack our globe/
i lacked control, tears in abundance like iraqi oil/
looked at Jesus, please dont let me burn like stacks of coal/
without a single word He palmed my head and healed contusions/
put his lips to mine, opened my lungs and then he blew in/
"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh....now thats my first breathe of life"/
re-opened my eye-lids and gained insight in my iris/
wisdom came naturally, realized the lies of science/
realized that we are violent and our time's a Time of Defiance/
few exist Holy, but to all He brings judgement/
the one good apple in the barrel has the greatest substance/
he spoke in defense of how we're slaves of governments/
n' how we ignored God's covenent but leaned towards the frauds of satan/
no more waitin, for all time will end at days end/
with the Signs complete were gettin close to the vaccination/
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Old 07-26-03, 03:11 AM   #2
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I liked this piece alot...where I come from we hold RELIGION in ver high regaurd....nice to see someone usin god's gift...holla
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Old 07-26-03, 03:53 AM   #3
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Re: Purified Needle

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//turned around and knew Apacolypse would attack our globe/
i lacked control, tears in abundance like iraqi oil/
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yo this piece is dope don't let them sleep on this, i love how in the flow you made globe and oil flow together this definently some deep shit i am speechless so i guess thats it
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Old 07-26-03, 09:43 PM   #4
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ScriptiX thanks, religon should be important to everyone. its the most personal thing you can have.
and prophiit thanks for readin and replyin. IF ANYBODY READS MY SHIT AND DOESNT LIKE IT TELLL ME!!! i love constructive critism. UPPPPPPPPP.
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Old 07-27-03, 05:16 PM   #5
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yeah man thanx for tellin me to see this. it was good, u told me to write somethen about other things not the usual gun killer so i will and i hope u get to see it, if u do see it tell me if its what u was talkin bout, thanx man, u got good style and flow.1
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Old 07-27-03, 05:19 PM   #6
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i liked this shit man, nice flow and all that good shit
peace
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Old 07-27-03, 05:38 PM   #7
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i think you got this

im not really a religious man but this was good in my eyes

and wtf is up with your sig pic dunno wut you sayin or talkin in there
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Old 07-27-03, 08:15 PM   #8
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its good, but if anyone can prove to me god exist please tell me
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Old 07-27-03, 08:16 PM   #9
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oh yea, check my shit out aight, cheers
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Old 07-28-03, 02:57 AM   #10
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-=GrafiX=- thanks for replyin.

and i could prove it to you but then i would have to kill you.
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Old 07-28-03, 03:37 PM   #11
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Spirit you can look at a painting and see it 1000 different ways. im just using it as i can see past your shell for what you really are.

last time for me to up this. UP
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