HOOK: x2
What are you gonna do
The choice is up to you
What are you gonna do
Whats gonna be your new excuse

[Pledge] (Rhtymic In Bold)
Am a driving you crazy yet
Are you gonna hit me yet
Ama making you sweat
Is the pressure to much yet
What The Fucks Wrong With You Tonight...
I’ll Tie You To The Bed, Bit It Won’t be For Sexually Delight...
You want me to start countin the times you’ve crept
Is the anger risin yet
Have a hit a nerve yet
Is the fist clenchin yet
Are you squarin up ma face yet
Fuck You, I’m Superior In Height...
Thought I was Your Liberator, Your Glorious Knight...
Planning on how to hide the body yet
Thought bout what your lies are yet
Thought bout how your gonna cover it up yet
So come on tell me son what’s your one regret
My Regret, Getting’ Together With You...
Gettin’ Upset? This Is One Relationship – I Wanna Forget...
Is it me loving you….are you angry yet
A am and let me tell you ..a aint mad yet
All those times you hurt me.what you think id forget
Bitch ave had brusies on ma face since the day we first met
And every night it et worse with hollow threats
The only reason you kept me was for the sex
You Couldn’t Even Preform That Right, Could You?
You Want A Fight, Heres My Neck, Take A Bite...
But now am standing tall like a suffroget
Aint scared no more so are you ready yet
I realised. ave been playin Russian roulette
Every hits been getting harder..how harder will they get
Before I hit that bullet
Before you kill me dead
I aint taking the chance no more you’ve had it
Cause now am coming on strong..so are you ready yet

HOOK: x2
What are you gonna do
The choice is up to you
What are you gonna do
Whats gonna be your new excuse

[Pledge:]
You hurt me so much a cant explain
Sometimes I cry rivers of pain
The chains you’ve got me in drive me insane
And my energy is beginning to drain
From all those chains.im feelin restrained
Your wrath has left me powerless to your reign
But I wont let you do it ever again
The angers rushing thru ma viens
All the deamons you’ve injected have been slain
Ever since ave met you all you’ve done is complain
All the times I tried to reason wit you was in vien
Sometimes I pray that my life wasn’t so mundane
This relationships to fucked to maintain
Not a shread of love for you still remains
So here a go am shetering maself from the rain
And theres no goin back no more…this is the end


[RhtymicTendicies]
Man This Bitch, It’s Fuckin High...
Wish She’d Just Fuck Off n’ Die...
She’d Better Hurry Up n’ Say Goodbye...
Fuck, What Am I Supposed To Do – Reply?
All Those Months, Thought We Were Inseparable...
Turns Out, Both Our Lives We’re Unbearable...
Terrible Actions ,Put Together With My Gun In Factions...
Gave Our Relationship – Countless Inevitable Distractions...
We never could Give Each other – Sexually Satisfactions...
£1000 bank Transactions, Acting like You’re the Innocent Party...
The Victim, Of Loves lost Fatality...
Remember, We used To Greet Each other Heartily...
Our love, Was Soaked In Originality...
I Thought, We We’re Blessed With Immortality...
But now, We’ve Both Gotta Face, Loves Reality...

HOOK: x2
What are you gonna do
The choice is up to you
What are you gonna do
Whats gonna be your new excuse

YOU TAPPED A COMMON RELATIVE EMOTION IN ABUSIVE MINDSCAPES.
Am a driving you crazy yet
Are you gonna hit me yet
Ama making you sweat
Is the pressure to much yet
THAT IS VERY EXPRESSIVE TO WHAT GOES THROUGH THE MINS OF ONE WHO LOOSES CONTROL

Fuck You, I’m Superior In Height...
Thought I was Your Liberator, Your Glorious Knight...
THE FEELING OF BETRAYAL OF LOVE MOST COMMONLY KNOWN AS THE TRIGGER EFFECT
TO MANY QOUTABLE LINES IMPRESSIVE10/10

uppin'

an improvement on the original
the two different perspectives gave it a bit more depth and added to the feel of it
flow was solid....vocab decent....overall give it a 8/10

this was very good, i was feelin the whole topic. This gave both sides of the arguement an shit and was very impressive how both sides managed to pull it off. Very good piece for both of you. 8/10

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

ahhh.....
Sick Collab..................daaayyuuummm......

Vocab was Sick
Flow Was OFF THE FUCKIN CHAIN
Wordplay...Saw it in there....

JUst Everything was sick.........You guys just blew this fuckin thing away.....nice peice...


----Rythmic.....Just Wondering If you would Like to do a Collab Someitme......



Prop to both of you...
Sick Drop

Sure, Whenevr Dawg - However I'm taking A Break FRom Writin' Soon - Gonna Drop A Piece Next week, Then Take A Break...But Thats Only Writin', I'll Still Be At R-B Everyday...

So Hit Me Up Today, Or Next Week

---Not To FreePost---

But Rhtymic You Can Take Yo Break....We Could Just Hit It up Next Week Somtime When You Ready.....Just Lemme Know.....

HIt me Up before, Cos I'm Gonna Break Next Week, For 2-3-4 weeks, whatever...

anyway: Uppin' This Piece

Sick shit , damn , this collab was Madd Sickkkkk , The Concept too it was Nice , I liked when ya all were arguing , that was really impressive , Overall nice shit , ya all get a 9/10...

uppin

Rhythmic Came Better On This Track... More Multis Etc.

I Sensed A HUGE Overuse Of The Word "Yet" In The First Verse...

Flow - 8/10
Vocab - 7/10
Enjoyment - 7/10
Topic - 8/10

I Liked This Although I Believe Both Of You Can Do Better...

-Thanks For The Reply Rythmic

wow this collab was tight... definitely feeling it
everything bout it was just sick... very cool
nice wordplay, creativity and flow
9/10
peace