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Old 07-27-03, 08:22 AM   #1
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1line words?

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ready
able
crazy
smoke
crazy
smoke
ready
able.


ready
slowing
down
holding
ground
steady
flow
ready
go
show
remarkable
skill.

poetic
scripts
aint
deep.

from
rhymes
to
lines
flowin
knowin
basic
taste
buds
gone.

many
blunts
many
joints
many
hits
many
trips
taking
unknown
pills
feelin
chills
then
thrills
still
remain
'ill'.


complete
me.



one.

line.

words.
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Old 07-27-03, 10:03 AM   #2
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It'll never be completed.


Though i liked the concept. What you did with it was good, but once or twice lost within itself.

...still, i like.

..resp...
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Old 07-27-03, 07:25 PM   #3
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