You Too Abstract....Not Appealing
Wheres Your Battle Record
Whys It 0-0...
I Dont Get You At All Man
Its Really Not What Im Feelin....

Who The Fuck Are You To Get To Judgeing?
I Look To The Sky And Hear Nothin But
Bird Chirps As I Conduct My Daily
Word Search Displaying The Gift
To Work Nerves Cause
You Get On Mine.....

Im Like Thirty Percent Game Lyrics Reflection
Ten Over Your Head The Only Exception
Mollesting The Alphabet Catching Cases
Like A Center Fielder Recognize Me Playa
Like I Look Familiar On Point Blazin In Your
Secret Cypher As A Sacred Street Writer With
Mad Lines Amongst This Concrete Jungle
Illness Makes Me Up Like Foundation To
Leave You Nothing To Fall Back On
Lifting The Concrete From You
~Content~
The Hollow Man With A Sixth Sense
Steppin Through Crews Like A Hollogram
Helpin A Beat Out Like A Sick Friend
You Need One Like Child Abuse Victims
Forreal Trill I Could Put An Acapella Cd Out
And Still Be The Real Deal You Continue
Trying To Magic Touch What You Cant Feel
If Your Mother Would Have Had An Abortion
I Would Travel Back In Time To Be
Extremely Supportive Your Hearts Porcelin
With A Spout And Fruit Punch...............

Think Of Kool Aid If This Seems To be Overwhelming
With An Abstract Factor...Instead Of Sounding Like
Everyone Else Stand Out Like A Sore Thumb Dammit

tight shit, didnt exactly understand tha whole thing but it was tight unique style.

I dug parts of it (people 'dismissing' the abstract due to not understanding or whatever...relevant to RB..)..

Other parts went within the piece and yourself. I dunno, i just woke up a while ago. and so i aint dug into the piece as much as i could. So half of this went over my head.

...resp...

Once again, I am feeling your work... Your style has nice flow and complexity. I even can relate to your topic of discussion, as can many on RB. Too often is that mind state apperant here, so I feel where your coming from. Your very talented so do not let anyone discourage you... Keep um guessing..

Peace out,

BounceDog...

__________________
FUCKA BABYLON BANDIT!!!

Thank You For Not Being Stupid...Taking The Time
To Depict A Flow That I Dont Consider Abstract...
Hard To Follow..Whatever....Its Not Rocket Science
Nor A Demostration Of Abstract For Dummies

Thank You For Using Your Eyes..Mind A Little...
And Not Being A Stupid Backpacker Hater

I Dont Even Portray That Image....
Does Being Educated Well Make You
Less Appealing? Growing Up Around
All Types Of People?

^^Er, so it weren't a 'blast' of sorts at those who 'dismiss' more abstract and/or complex and/or 'educated' works?

Cos your reply seems to say yes. But i dunno, cos it also indicates (maybe unintentionally) a blast at more than one person in this thread...

...clarify?

Varento..Noone In This Forum Its Open Mic Individuals
That Are Too Lazy And Maybe Dont Like Something That
Different With Ways Of Saying Things That They Never
Thought Of..Or Maybe Not But The Flows There If You Read

I Said Thank You Because People Here Actually read And Are
Educated To Some Extent Which Is Enjoyable In All Aspects

Yo Yo yo Yo...YouKnowWhatImSayin That My Flow Dunny
Forreal forreal Dawg Son..Im not your Son..Im Not An Animal
I Dont Know What Your Saying Psychobabble....

Some People Just Need To Go To Sleep With
Their Head On An English Book And Hope
Osmosis Takes Place

^^Thought as much.

End of the day, they're the water on the duck's (you) back...got to understand it, and to an extent, accept it for what it is.

Er, but i dunt really need to say this, do i? I'm just being a patronising hoor...(apologies)...

...once again, liked the piece. Read it over again (more awake now) and dug most parts now.

..resp...

i like ur work its good nice complexity n i like ur stly nice drop

Thank You For Reading...Thinking A Little Bit...Adding
In The Beginning...Thinkin About Kool Aid At The End
Ohh This Was So Abstract And The Flow Wasnt There
When Its Obvious If You Read...Stupid People

Thank You For Being Intelligent..
Not Simple Minded...Or One Dimentional
Open* With Observatins Of Other People Rhymin...

Do I Have To Place An Astric When Im Using Wordplay
Or Cant People Think....Im Home From Work And Bitchy


* To All The Girls...Serious
If Your On Your Period...
Dont Wear A White Dress,
You Really Wont Feel So Special....

*Downing..Drowning*

I liked it a lot, the "abstract" stream of conciousness type approach can get cluttered, but this flowed in a unique style that i got a Saul Williams vibe from (practical contradiction) the wordplay was impressively complex yet it seemed so simple, i really liked the beginning "taking on criticism" mode before you stated your "argument". You seem really in touch with what you do/who you are and I cant think of a greater compliment that could be given. Keep up the good work.

Thank You Very Much For Seeing Things How You
Have Before Making An Evaluation...Not Being
One Dimentional...Saul Williams Is A Favorite Of
Mine And Is A Prime Example Of Why Im In A Whole
Different League Lyrically Than Some Of My Past Friends

What They Consider Whining Is Actually Illness And
Making The Thinkers Think..Which Is Not that Hard..
Even If You Look Like A Crack Baby ~Noone In Particular~

Thank You For Looking Into This Seriously

Peace