check in 10 lines so d/r no bull shit no crew votes u know the shit

ok im gana go ahead and spit,

look look im makin this mc look like a lost bleak, my puches are breakin bones from his shoulder to his cheak
my piss is hotter then his rhymes, there weak, i dont know if this is normal or if hes jus bein meak
i dont think i shouled be messin with this wack kat, i hurd hes a gangsta
i hurd he was interlexual like a homosexual and quick to "bang ya"
thought "how couled this mc be queer, hes quick on his feet like bruce lee"
untill his punches started comin soft, and next thing he was jus hittin on me
ok u ready, im gana bring up a notch, can ur cerebelem take that
im talkin bout ur mellon, big words are enough to lay u on yo back
breakin it down, yes im makin fun of u cuz ur not that bright
how long you been around?, i hope not long cur u allways bringin it light
even yo boyfriend said in bed that u tried to give him head and missed
damn dude thats pretty bad, even yo guy is gettin u dissed
im done callin this kid dumb and gay, so now lets talk about his style
this kid cant rap, man im fat and ive done push ups that were more worth the while
(finisher)
i cant make the conection with his name, hugh G. recktion, with his reflection
in his pants his penis must have a whole other section, but u know ppl who talk big must have small erections

sorry i went over

the rules clearly say 10 lines dumbfuck cant you read?,
in a shame contest..is the only time you place above me,
Hugh G, remember the name, in fact worship it kid,
this thread has always been dope..since ive been in it,
wait a minute, 76 posts and you still dont have a win?,
a quartet of loses, well thats 4 more that you have friends,
never again, will i waste my time on LLB, what a herb,
when quoting my drops, is the only time you post an ill verse,
need to rehearse, cause kid you look way out of practice,
voters will say "My verse was ill",and yours? "Shit happens,"

uppin for votes............................................. .........................................

hugh g rection won this str8 up..

check this line out...

need to rehearse, cause kid you look way out of practice,
voters will say "My verse was ill",and yours? "Shit happens,"

hahaha

got damn mayne...

vote hugh g recktion

that shits played, ive read that atleast 10 times this past week, but u new here so u prolly havent looked at very many battles

naw i really havent... the fact is..played or not

hugh got this round

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ok thats cool man, i was trna be mean or nuttin, i liked his verse anyways, played or not................uppin for votes

uppin for votes everyone
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Hugh did take this pretty easily...

Even with the other cat goin way over...

One reason, acutally two...

Wordplay and flow...
Of course punches...

But this battle was won cuz someone was outclassed...

Ballin had one good line, his closer, and even that could have been written with much more impact.
The rest was simple and not very effective.

Keep at it, dude.

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G got this one pretty easily, I mean the other dude was pretty good but he had no strucutre. G hadthe better punches and flow to go with it.

Vote-G

Sucks I can poll but can you hit this up for me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...49&pagenumber=3