PHONE:come on baby answer the phone.
TONE~TONE
ANSWERING MACHINE. heyIT'S HOTTIE im not home right now if you like leave a message or a number and i will get back to youy when i can.
PHONE:come on HOTTIE baby answer the fucking phone.i know you home.
look pick up this phone now i swear to god.pick up the phone pick it up you bitch!!!!!
HER hello hello.......


never realized i loved you or to what extent-
no feeling where exzempt-but your the cause of all my suicide attempts-
see what you did this slit wrist-doesnt compare to your final kiss-
but does remind me and bind me in how blindly i miss-your fingertips-and lips.
and it's a trip...how when you told cops you'd just tripped-when my temper was fucked and my fists just slipped-
never os should smoked that shit twice dipped-

i love you.... i really do-ive known you 2 days but this is true-you really have no clue-
how i camp outside your window-lace your indo-with ging sing and GINKO-grease myself in your clothes and stalkings talking to a dildo-

how can you think im crazy...yeah crazy in love-
every since i bought you that drink in the club-
and you left after giving me a hug-slipped you a date rape drug-

but instead-of us making love...fallowed you home saw you in bed- giving your boyfriend head-but i'll forgive you if you forgive me for not choking him sooner and leaving him for dead-

why you cryin what does he have that i dont-shut the fuck up stop denying-tell me you love me or ill beat you dont think i wont-
GET CONFUSIOUS-WHEN I STABBED RUTHLESS-

now there is nothing in our way isnt that better-
already staged your death with some bitch i killed with your dental record-
sorry boute the tape-but i didnt want you to yell rape-no point though we in the woods now and you have no escape-
i know its alot but i trust you will cope-this isnt lust we'll be togeather forever i even mailed your family your suicide note-
there..... there....it's time to die!!!got yeah!!!! what you cant take a joke?
stop rolling your eyes back dont do that with your tongue you might choke.
hey i have an idea why dont we elope-i got something for you as soon as i rip out of my ex wifes finger i placed in that envelope-
ready to walk down the isle so i wont take no for an answer its feavel-
take this ring araound your veign hold this hyperdermic needle-
grab my hand it will be over soon give me a cringe-now we bound by blood love and this seringe-

we going to hell togeather- forever-the last thing you hears a dial tone-stupid bitch maybe next time you wont pick up the phone.

lol.....umm how do i comment on this...

i really can't..but it was pretty good word..umm lost for words

that shit was nice...but Word...why the fuck you takin' my job?????? lol j/k

LOVE ME HOTTIE LOVE ME OR I SWEAR TO GOD ILL FIND YOU......LOL BESITOS MI AMOR

Lol.....

Nice....

Doesnt Look like you put alot of time into this...
Vocab- Good Use Of It...7/10
Flow- Excellent...9/10
Wordplay- This Was Alright....7/10
Creativity- Nice Topic.....8/10

Overall- Nice Peice....Enjoyed Reading this....

8/10

ahhh good ol horrorcore....if u feel like u need some pointers contact me lol....but much love on this piece...nice to see this style online..would like to hear the audio if u do it....

peace

lol told u it was good word

man every thing ive read by you is sick. You got some of the sicest stuff on here. So how are you 0-3 i mean i havent read anything remotly sucky yet.

like me tha dude stopped battlin coz there alot of dikriders and too many hearbs on tha site.

^^^WORD ???

hey puto...what the fuck you think you doin' maricon?????? You can send them Besitos to my ass homie...lol...tryinna take away my manly dutiez and shit...

yes indeed... that's why I don't battle that much too...