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Old 07-31-03, 01:21 PM   #1
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i'm sitting here at home being bored as fuck
come on here readin shit being told i suck
i don't have any fuckin wordplay or any shit like that
so i don't use big words apparently that me makes me whack
i know i got flow but that's not good enough tho
need more wordplay so here the fuck i go
my lyrical skill is histericaly a miracle
histericaly miracle? am i really that lyrical?
when i spit to you bitches i hold back i'm mysterious
i aint playin nor am i delirious i'm bein fuckin serious
i'm like a rappin robot without a malfunction
i'm tryin to elevate at this RB junction
your probly reading this thinkin you have dyslexia
my skills are PHAT bitches i don't have anorexia
that's all i'm gonna spit thats it i'm out
i'll be back to post more without a doubt

i know it's short, but meh, i was bored to fuck
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Old 07-31-03, 09:47 PM   #2
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hmmm..is people been call n u wack..and this was ur 'retaliation' post..theyre still right..this wasnt good at all..and do u know what wordplay is?..cause u didnt have any..like 2 lines u used wordplay..at least attempted to..but it was all simple..all things every 1's seen before..u got a lot of elevate n to do..ya flow wasnt all that..real simple..kinda boring..and u need to up ya multi game..cause the few u had..were like the rest of the post..simple..
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Old 08-01-03, 03:10 AM   #3
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wack i mean he said word play come on people look at this
histericaly miracle? am i really that lyrical?
when i spit to you bitches i hold back i'm mysterious
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Old 08-01-03, 07:00 AM   #4
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Yeah, this seemed to me you were trying to ratelliate toward the guys who said you were wack, but you didnt actually have any wordplay in this piece, although - you dont NEED wordplay in every piece. .flow was ok, but seriously, this was weak, just basic rhyming, everything, it was just blahzay. .

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Old 08-01-03, 10:23 AM   #5
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Old 08-01-03, 05:52 PM   #6
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^^i think this fella thinks vocab is wordplay.....

u dont really have flo like u said...and all ur vocab was way outta context....

i think by u droppin this ur provin everyone right in there words of

u suck......jus my opinion tho...no hate
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Old 08-01-03, 06:39 PM   #7
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I am pretty sure that is what he thinks, Krem saying you are holding back doesn't mean much especially if you are, you are defeating the purpose anyway by saying you are.
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