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08-02-03, 06:07 PM
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IP: 6C8F 16E1
yo uppin for this...niggaz peep
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08-02-03, 08:21 PM
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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IP: 932A D079
Beat Is Good...Your Delivery Is Like All Over The Place Man...Your Flow Is Heaps Hard To Follow...Seems Heaps Choppy And Hard To Understand...Just Work On Pronunciation And Delivery All The Time And Its Always Good To Up Lyrics...Stay Up...Pz...
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08-02-03, 11:09 PM
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IP: 5CCE 18A1
your delivery was off point, and your flow was off too....it aint really collaborate with the beat....and take away the echoing, its too much...just stick with your doubles and leave it as that....the beat was iight, lyrics were ok...i aint like it much but wateva.... stay up and keep doing your thing tho....OnE
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