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Old 08-05-03, 01:54 PM   #16
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I would like to point out x-centric's response:

I Liked This Pieace G...Tha Flow Was On Point..Ya Know What I Mean..Nice Wordplay Shit's Tight Keep Doin Ur Thang Man

And mine when i adressed b-square, of course no beef there b!:

Or if you like, i can just mindlessly compliment him,
Bounce, that shit was tight, you should drop more, you had me in there
Flow was great
Structure was complex and good

'since i like to be simple i have no insight and no criticism...'
Isn't it great when you're right?
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Old 08-05-03, 02:40 PM   #17
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no offence X-centric, and no, i don't know what you mean, elaborate, how was the flow 'on point'?
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Old 08-07-03, 05:06 PM   #18
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uppin....
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Old 08-08-03, 01:26 PM   #19
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THis piece really thouched me since both of my parents and my ex-husband are in the army. Now that all of this "war on terroism" stuff is going down I really scared of losing someone I know. This piece speaks for millions of Americans who felt and probably still do feel that way after the events of September 11th.
Keep write...your words are deep...*LOL*
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Old 08-11-03, 06:33 PM   #20
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*Lets it out of cage* Run free big one, run free! *kicks it up the page*...
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Old 08-13-03, 05:00 PM   #21
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??? huh ???

Either I have had too much... or not enough....cuz I can not understand you right now Varentao. Damn I always catch your meaning, implied or not, but this time I can not. Oh well it's been one of those weeks for me, so thanks for making me use my brain, even if I did not figure it out. I need to back away from the Bud, back away from the Bud...

*turns out the blunt*
*and pulls out hair*
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Old 08-14-03, 09:11 AM   #22
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this piece was heartfelt
really understood what you were saying and I must say that this piece is much respected.
nice flow and great wordplay and use of vocab
keep dropping shit like this
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