peep this and give me ya feedback afterwards iight


grabbin for air as i hold ur "life-in-a-flask".........i can cut it short at any moment when in my hand its a "knife-i-grasp"//
my rhymes tangle necks as i "strangle-tha-weak"......in text i stress ya mind till ur "feaseably-meak"//
im tha virus that infests ur "blood-system".....and when u think its as bad as it can get i'll make ur life easily "not-worth-livin"//
resistin' tha "suicidal-tendancies"......ur about ta cock tha gun only to find tha "clip-empty"//
i'll teach u a lesson thats "evidently-descriptive".......when its all done my spits will b like cocaine "simply-addictive"//
i mix vocab wit rhymin' to get tha perferct "lyrical-elixur".....sometimes so unstoppable i give it tha name of a "tyranical-mixture"//
intense temperature risin as im "spittin-heat"......after a battle wit me u'll go weeks b4 "admittin-defeat"//
i can be crowned king and i still dont get tha "respect-i-deserve"....my life can be cruel as like batter im "fooled-by-tha-curves//
curves that i get thrown "inside-and-out".....fuckin shit u think u gotta it tough my rage causes "me-to-shout"//
in a freestyle i sometimes bounce from "subject-to-subject"......but as long as it flows smoothly tha "critics-will-love-it"//
in a world built on hate and "dependent-on-greed".....how tha fuck can we create peace when there's still "mouths-to-feed"//
u see what i mean as i "clearly-state-it".....fuck authority cuz its only "power-being-wasted"//
and when i obtain my goals and see a plaque thats "platinum-plated"......i know that in tha end even thru tha strifes of life i will b "glad-i-made-it"/////


tel me what ya think of it all.....peace...