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Old 08-08-03, 04:29 PM   #1
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Zero Detox-(Battle Diss)-Feedback

IP: 8B1A 32D3

ha Rhap, we'll start like this and face the facts for just one sec/
you's like a washed up insect/
a has been who never will be again/

i ask myself how dumb can one man be/
then i look at my list of dawgs defeated by me/
from Dave UP to TGAV/
and then multiply the answer by three/
that's three that have ceased to be/

itz like you rolled the dice three times and ended up on ice/
it was one then two, now mutha fuckin thrice/

it starts like this/
i grab you and make your necks errect/
and pull till the bitch dissconnects/
and that's what you get when you fuck wid D/
we're having a rough time founding out what sex/
Rhap is, could me male or possibily transevest/

some things are better left unsaid/
but i'ma tell you now, after this Rhap will be dead/
gone, and it won't take long/
and fuck it, i'ma tip of this bucket of shit/
then drown you in a pool spit/

your like a kid who lossed his way/
and ended up at the bottom of Detox bay/
i write and i rhyme from june to may/
and i'm earnin my stay/
but unfortunate for Rhap his light at the end just got grey/
he's a stray and i'm taking him to the pound/
and who woulda knew/
that it would be "lil D", who turned Rhap's nervous red to a break down blue/
and YD, fuck you too/
i'm gonna elevate/
and you're just gonna incinerate/
aint no debate about it/
here's the count down to it/

3....
2....
Detox just dropped another 1~~~~~~
here's the gun, might as well off your self/
and save Detox the time of puttin you on a mortitianist's shelf!
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Old 08-08-03, 04:35 PM   #2
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NOT BAD AT ALL I SEE A WHOLE WORLD OF POTENTIAL HERE YOU GOT IT NEXT TIMNE REREAD CHANGE WHAT SEAMS WEAK TO YOU OTHER THEN THAT GOOD PEACE
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