A Shattered Vision Fucks My Mind, Of Distorted Rooms
Fencing Demons Deep Inside, Internal Madness Broods
Painted Eyes Skip Across The Lid, Light Of Life Consumed
Walls Close In On My Heart, A Dank, Suffocating Cage
Girl In My Dreams, You Play The Part, A Pendulum Of Rage
Swells Within My Soul, An Ebbing Tide, Ever Of Liquid Pain
Washes Ashore, Bursts The Dam, Now Im Crying Even More
Tears And Ink Perform, A Dance Of Mocking, Laughing Swirls
Im An Empty Shell, Cant Be Like Before, Not Without My World
Throat Enclosed, No Air Flow Is Allowed For Me Today
Heart Saying Yes Brain Screaming No, My Vision Shifts To Grey
My World Is Now An Etch-A-Sketch Consisting Of Lies, And Hate
I Shake My Head ,Makes The Pain Die, But Visions Wont Evaporate
Remembering All The Good Times, Me And My Honey That Night
Fire Crackles, Her In My Arms, Everything Would Be Alright
But Then She Began To Yell, Bloodshot Eyes Wild And Alive
The LSD, Or Maybe Ecstasy, Either Way She Grabbed A Knife
A River Of Blood Runs From Me, Theres A Puncture In My Vein
One Was To End My Misery, The Other To Cause More Pain
As My Nerve Ending Screams, A Grim Smile Creeps Across My Face
Dieing Like My Dreams, Now With My Girl In A Better Place
Next To Me,Is My Only Love, Lungs Not Breathing Anymore
Im Lighter Now, Goodbye Earth Youll See Me Nevermore

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wow. this was an extremely dope piece...vocab, flow, creativity...everything was here in full effect.


the only thing i ddint like was how sudden the whole "her flipping out thing" came about. it seemed a little out of the blue. nonetehless, this was a good piece.

liked this drop

vocab and flow was spot on
story well done.....

'The LSD, Or Maybe Ecstasy, Either Way She Grabbed A Knife
A River Of Blood Runs From Me, Theres A Puncture In My Vein
One Was To End My Misery, The Other To Cause More Pain
^lliked that

i thought the flipping out was good.....changed it up unexpectedly

upin for for feecback..rereading this drop im real proud of this piece

Nice,nice.I liked that vocab.

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