I started this shit like a week or 2 ago and I forgot about it and shit and now I don't really feel like finishing it cuz it wasn't exactly coming out tha way I wants cuz it has like no multies and shit, fuck it.....Maybe yall can help me out.....


Hook:
If you had 24 hours to live, what would you do?//
Would you live it right or wrong, what would u choose?//
It's not a simple question, so think hard about it//
Would you sit back and relax, or get rowdy?//

Verse:
If I had 24 hours that would be 14-40 minutes//
That's 14-40 minutes of real living//
That would make 86 thousand 400 seconds//
Just to sit back and relax, with no stressing//
Tha best's when I'm smoking blunts with my peoples//
Not worried bout tomorrow cuz there would b no sequel//
See no evil, and help strengthen tha weak kids//
And make peace with everyone I had beef with//
Than help feed wits and teach them tha wisdom//
And take some time to give rappers constructive criticism//
And then rip them, cuz I'm dedicated to tha game//
24 left and all I ask for is 5 minutes of fame//
Living my name, and show love for my brothers//
And write a song for my girl to show that I love her//
Then I'd grip tha guns and then rob a fucking bank//
And take all tha cash and split it up for my fam//
Just to tell them thanks for everything that they've done//
Let them know I'll be looking over from above//
Watch over my sons, I always got ya'll backs//
And let my soul live on through all of my raps//
Stab my dad, get in tha car and load tha tech//
And pop every muhfucka who never showed respect//
Explode they neck, what you expect me to stay calm?//
I only got 24 hours to live, I'mma go out like a bomb//
With a big ass bang, and than claim my throne//
So now mad scientists gon try to have my brain cloned//

That's sick tha vision/ thats a dope rhyme/ they shoulda replaced you with mase way back at the time/ if i had 24 hours to live id wanna smack the people of california an tell em' how fuckin stupid this race for governor is/ id run up in viacom studios where MTV is produced/ and i would hang Mr. redstone from a fuckin neuce/ i would take there money an have em' deliver a check, to my family back home so they could live without worries or stress/ i would be put on the big screen an tell the whole world/ that there minds are in the hands of others/ media giants who make the stupidest shit for young kids to discover/ id assasinate the president, and free the palestinians, end any isrelations that are country may have with em/ then id say good bye to my family, an try to keep em sane, yes i will gone but just remember the name A-M-C and im out

I DIDNT LIKE THIS AS MUCH DOESBT SEAM REALLY LIKE YOU TO SIMPLE NO REAL THOUGHT YOUR BETTER THEN THIS DUKE

Yea, shit was more like a quick freewrite and just an outline for me to write a real verse to i guess.....thanx for feedback