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Old 08-10-03, 03:21 PM   #1
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Tomorrow

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I want tomorrow, I need tomorrow,
I cannot handle today, I want an end,
How can I live and carry on with all?
I want 'the' end I want tomorrow...

I feel a pain, I feel terror,
I feel tears, I want tomorrow,
Maybe things will be better,
Maybe life will be happy,
I only want truth, I only want an end...

I want tomorrow,
I despise today,
Maybe tomorrow,
Is better, is the answer,
Why, when and how, today,
I want the finish, I want tomorrow...

I need an end...
I need tomorrow...
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Old 08-10-03, 03:22 PM   #2
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This was just me writing, i only put in paragraphs and comma's after, it was just thoughts...any comments?
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Old 08-11-03, 02:39 AM   #3
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nice,a bit short,ya seem a lil depressed,keep ya head up,tomorrows a brighter day,theres always a brighter day.~1~
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