aight
Rules
Honost votes
no d/r,bitin,feedin etc.
10 barz(20 lines) max
no pre writtens
drop 45 min after check in
you spit first

checkin in
do the same
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IIGHT BUT JUST PUT 16BARS =16 LINES IIGHT, LIKE REAL HIP HOP IS IIGHT?!!..................................................

what???????????
a bar is 2 lines like a bar but whatever your spittin 16 lines ima spit about 20 whateva
thats your check in

Violent with pboy givin 'sever concusions', ya 'dome is crushin', Cause im 'splittin wigz' like 'combs and brushes'/(wig a fake mc)
Carfull Son...Cause ya talents 'down the drain' whever the 'toilet flushes'!!//1(SHIT)
Choke??Not P, He 'luves to spit', So i'll 'bust em quick' spillin his 'guts N shit'/
'Fuck this Bitch', Pboy the biggest 'asshole' i know, guess my Dick is a 'Custom Fit'!!//2(he's a bitch to other people)
This kat is queer, U should be 'wise an just quit', u got 'somethin to fear'......Vbusive's 'nice when he spits'/
Like he 'masturbates with blades, I got a 'knife in his shit'..Survive?~'Son i got a bullet for every year of ya life in my clip!!'~//3(whatever age this kat is)
I'm equipped wit 'Syringes', intentionally 'burnin ya set', puttin more 'Needles in this 'kat' than a fuckin 'Emergency Vet'!!/
'Learnin U yet', Im 'Turnin ya neck', Treatin P like a 'ball at a dunk contest', I'm 'Slammin this Bitch all over the net'!!//4(internet)
He Claimin he 'Rough N Raw',Naw,I'm 'Callin his bluff an all', Spreadin his 'Guts all over the wall'/
Yeah this kids is ~'Loaded with paper'~, but thats cuz he ~'Stuff His Bra'~!!//5
Son, just pay attention, "Thug" i'll bend you backwards in half then pass this bastard and laugh/
Man i plasterd his ass, P makes 'mac and cheese' everyday just to say he 'Mastered his Kraft'!!//6 hahahahahaha
Son you 'surpass the sheep', ur 'Nursery Rhymes' are 'Tattered and weak', 'Puttin me fast asleep'/
My foots on the 'Gas of the jeep', 'Chasin ur ass till i crash' as I 'Smash this bitch all over the street//7
If P reads this batlle its a reminder U so amazingly fake. Got bullets grazin ya place uve made a mistake/
Vbusive 'Erasin Ya Face'!!, This dumbass 'Tossin T-Bonez to the Sky', Just to say he's 'Raisin Tha Steaks!!//8 (Stakes)
'Eyez are red', Like a Gunfight, You'll get lost in this thread, Despite what you Read now you know why you dead/
Its over, I gave that 'Monkey' some 'Food for thought', and put a 'Banana clip' 'Inside his head'!!//9
Vbusive will 'curse ya soul', Basically 'Eatin ya verse whole' P screamin for help like he gettin his purse stole!!/
Hey, it coulda been 'Worse though', and listen, I wouldnt be callin you 'SON' if your momz had taken her 'Birth Control'!!!!!!//10 LMAO(read through the verse

just though that since the beginning think about it. A line -----
and a bar ========= your probably right though its just hype but since my internet MC days thats how its been.
UPPIN FO VOTES hit this up with an honost vote.
HONOST VOTES

just though that since the beginning think about it. A line -----
and a bar ========= your probably right though its just hype but since my internet MC days thats how its been.
UPPIN FO VOTES hit this up with an honost vote.
HONOST VOTES
You got till 315

Uppin after this kid spite
Honost Votes
Explained Votes
drop one after he spits if he does
thanks peace

Stop fuckin with a KING you're a Rook at best/1
Give you a pass to my battle labeled shook Access/2
Cause I don't recycle rhymes i spread the knowledge/3
Your flows to rusty come back when its polished/4
Nobody wants to see you get blown up in your place/5
You wasting my time and all my memory space/6
What I do to V.A. gone be Ludacris but nobody knows/7
Give'em first aid unit kits, cause i was throwing'em bows/8
Have I heard your rhymes before? I can't believe what you say/9
Cause they started selling trash yesterday on e-bay/10
I'ma have to show you what real niggas with mics do/11
You think you got hot shit cause you spit at your high school/12
You not on my level, and i don't got no elevator/13
Come back to rap when you styles been elevated/14
Somebody better stop me 'fore i rush this nigga/15
I shitted on your whole rhyme, somebody flush this nigga/16

THATS 16 BARS LIKE ALL RAPS YOU EVER HEARD

this was a close battle and p boy came kinda hard for a newb
but my vote goes to va he was betta all round and just about got the win

vote=verbaly abusive

UPPIN FA VOTES.......................................
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Uppin!!.........................................
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vote - verbaly abusive
had a better verse overall, came harder with punches n wordplay,
good battle
Chris kept it a simple verse wit no stretched bars
gj to both

hit htis up with a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68901
thx