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08-17-03, 11:27 AM
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ShO-Nuff. Fuckers
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IP: C1DA C961
Hey mic sycke i didnt vote on that battle dickhead........
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08-17-03, 11:34 AM
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The sYcKlE Makes Me Do It
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IP: 579F F01D
No 13th desciple did
and said i have friends voting for me when i think soldier sucks And you were agreeing with him when i said a real herb takes a weak after blowing his deadline to drop his prewritten verse thats what i said and I KNOW YOU GUYS ALWAYS VOTE FOR EACHOTHER ANYWAYS i been on and off this site for 2 years now I know the Deal I SEE YOUR NAME IN THEIR MAN AND I CO |
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08-17-03, 12:26 PM
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i eat..eat..eat..emcees
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IP: 18C0 C7B9
^so thats the reason why u hate....because Av spanked u and
I voted against u....cuz this is the third thread i seen u hate on from me in the last 10 minutes....damn....i got a cyber stalker
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08-17-03, 10:25 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
This was pretty good.
From a writers standpoint i can appreciate the effort and emotion put into this due to doubting this is yalls true emotions..If that's the case then it's alot harder to stepo outside the box and write from anothers veiw points.. I give it overall a 7/10... Which is good coming from me..Basically because the content..The rest was a lackluster..I felt 13th desciple had the better ontent while bribe brought better flow with exceptionally nice content.. Wordplay? ..0/10...Kind of hurts you...Even tho i know the piece isn't meant for wordplay and things of the sort...And you don't really have to have it...It does show a good ammount of growth and elevation due to the creativity it takes to transform words into play when it's dealing with emotional/real shit.. I don't know if yall will like the critique..But this is how i feel... Keep writing..1ne |
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08-17-03, 11:56 PM
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The sYcKlE Makes Me Do It
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IP: 70A9 C9CB
NO BEEF
13th i will not bother you no more |
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08-18-03, 11:14 AM
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ShO-Nuff. Fuckers
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IP: C1DA C961
up ....
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08-20-03, 10:40 PM
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i eat..eat..eat..emcees
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IP: 18C0 C7B9
u+p........=...........up
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09-29-03, 08:41 PM
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GÄÑg§tå Gu®£
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IP: 7ADD 192E
dayum ~hot sh!T~
I enjoyed readin it... Props to all of yahz
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09-29-03, 09:09 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: CEF5 716F
damn!! yall verse's were both sick...i was really feelin this drop. Both yall word play and vocab was sick. The chorus really hooked the two of yall verses together...it worked mad well. Very nice drop, keep doin yall thangz and stay up, 1
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