unlike alot of the attempts I see here at multi's mine actually make sense and aren't just random rhyming words stuck together: check it

perfection reflected in perplex letterings
infested with intense grammar in sentences
intentions bent on forensic evidance
to test the guilty an' arrest the innocents
death incidents like diabetics without insulin
hyperactive like a bi-polar without ritilin
still I'm fiddlin' with riddles of intellect
intent on bein' tha realest on this internet
then end that with a contract say'n I'm the illest yet
'cause the way I kill a set is almost militant
i'm a guerilla kid, castro to your chi guevara
I last an' laugh tho you executed in trasonal terror
I breath with serine uneffected, you plead in despare
my reasons un-fair leavin' weaklin's just scared
impared thru a dust of mustar seeping in air
leaves you sleeping beneath six feet of sediment layers
I'm tha resident slayer of menacin' rap majors
collapse your delicate syndicate of little bitch haters
this just scribbles on paper, still you in danger
'cause my skill is insaner than pro, an' you a little bit tamer
a diligent debater, so you can't win an arguement
an' if you manage to harness it, I'm "Herb" harvestin'
an' un-earthin' ya hooks like a perterbed farmers hand


HOW'S THAT FOR MULTI?... HOLLA

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Blunt some real tite rhymes there thro-out...first three bars had alliteration which sounded real dope...none apart from that, would of been better if ya had....nonetheless a hella dope verse...oNe..return tha favour

thanx man... HOLY SHIT YOUR RECORDS WORSE THAN MINE!!!! damn man, i never thought it was possible.. ne-way, aside from that... thanz 4 the feedback...

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uppin' you know the deal, u reply I reply... I'm sick of peeping people's shit an' getting slept on myself... and I give the same degree of feedback I recieve, you give a 1 liner you get a 1 liner, you give a paragraph, you get one... etc... so let's see some feedback

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FUCK YOU ALL IF YOU DON'T PEEP THIS.... I know my shit's a knockout but damn... lol...

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i like it and i think im understanding the concept of multi's a lil but i need help on that illness here i like how you twist words but not they menaing ill straight through

uppin'... no one I replied to has even replied here

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Yo good stuff,Multies obviously,liked tha flips,flow,wordplay dawg,you have a weird but nice style,sorta Aesop shit,anyway good stuff.

Peace

that's the second time someone's told me I got an aesop flow.. lol.. 1 thx 4 the comment..

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some nice rhymes in there man. like your stuff. check mine out as well and tell me what you think. keep you stuff up dogg

Aiyyo, hott ass drop. U had good vocab and flow thru-out. Ur multis were nothin less perfect. I felt it all the way thru ur verse. And u had some nice ass illiterations.

damn shit was knockin excellent vocabulary example's......some of these cats should learn from dis kid..... keep elevating son......my fav quote was"death incidents like diabetics without insulin
hyperactive like a bi-polar without ritilin
still I'm fiddlin' with riddles of intellect
intent on bein' tha realest on this internet
then end that with a contract say'n I'm the illest yet
'cause the way I kill a set is almost militant"

ill ass lines....stay up....

thanx, finally these kids realize the skill... lol... uppin'..

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perfection reflected in perplex letterings
infested with intense grammar in sentences
intentions bent on forensic evidance
to test the guilty an' arrest the innocents

Like the vocab nigga