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08-19-03, 08:59 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Yo Street Thug, why don't you got any dick, boy? Here's a little rhyme for you compliment's from the Flow Stoppa:
Dickless bitch in this land of hard rocks and glocks I range supreme like your girlfriends pussy aches for a hard cock You can betcha ass I get in No you can't win it, betta let me finish I'll lyrically stop ya heart Up in your gang you play the smallest part My rhymes are small, but deadly to When you get up in my face I'll smack your bitch ass to Battles end up puttin' you in a bad place Like after I car crashes in a police chase Don't gloat cause you'll choke when I confront ya One on one. me and you, don't try to front fucka' Put the gun to your head, Mack 11 is what I tote Pull the trigga to your head, it's Murder She Wrote
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08-19-03, 09:08 AM | #2 | ||||||
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Not really a lot for me to critique here, maybe you should of made it longer, It flowed nicely - the even bars helped with that, you had some internals there, but if you'd of added more multi's it would of been made twice as dope. Weird topic to drop a verse too but you did your thing. Keep at my man.
Reply to mine: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73796 |
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08-19-03, 05:00 PM | #3 | |||||||
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