u spit first
15 min to spit after set up
10 to 16 lines
no hate votes
no crew votes
no dick riddin
check in and spit

hey i mad the rules in bitch slap so u got to spit first cause i mad the rules
so go
and if u dont want to follow the rules then we aint battlen
what is the big deal i am a newb so why wont u go first so go u have 15 min
GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

when I unleash the beast in my lyrics there's no Damage-Control, I'm a Savage-With-Blows!/{1}
when thrown they'll Ravage-Ur-Soul! u couldn't 'spit on point' if I Stabbed-Thru- Ur-Throat!/{2}
the wrath of my Tongue's-Fury, will leave u 'without the decision'..somethin like a Hung-Jury!/{3}
ur rhyme's speech is like a whore gobblin cuz u 'Cum-Slurry'! yo Dun'-Worry..I'll be swift when I Crumble-Ur-Words!/{4}
I 'hold this shit' down while ur 'Fumblin-Turds'! I Trip, Kick, and Stumble-Up- Herbs!/{5}
my lyrics make 'people stop' and humbles Those-Actin-Out-Quick-Verbs! I make 'jaws drop' like Reactions-To-Bit-Curbs!/{6}
ur spits?..I'm 'barely feelin it' like Crack-When-Split-Thirds! I Stay-True-To-Form while ur Gay-Crew-Gets-Torn!/{7}
u've Slayed-Fewer-Than-More! ur raps are garbage! whad u Engrave-Sewers-For- War?/{8}lol
this kid's a joke wantin to Beef-With-The-Best I'll leave ur lungs to Leak-Out-Ur- Chest!/{9}
kid u couldn't 'Reach' me like molar Teeth-With-Some-Crest, keep 'talkin pussy!' and soon u'll be Queefin-Ur-Breath!/{10}lol

ten lines fo u newb try to top it

aight since u thought that i was a newb that u could rip me with that weak ass verse but here is somethin alot weaker that will fuckin rip u kid

Yo saint why u tellin me about rhymin ??, shit you need to keep climbin //
to even see me , you’ll neva reach me to defeat me//
u fake, u aiint lyrically chosen/
i spit cold as ice leavin your ass frozen//
your still suck even though you cutting, copyin an pastin//
if you wanna beat me then your time is only waistin//
cause see, on stage, im killin tha mic//
you cant flow, like epileptics cant write//
but im not negative, im jus positive im the best//
spit bullets that split ya vest and deposit them in ya chest//
im comin hard, and thats wit an exclamation//
when u say u blowin tha spot, i didnt think u was dick suckin a dalmation//
You're played like my five-year old's newborn toys//
Don't know shit about Chicago, but I could still make Illa Noyz//
I'm sick of this, here's my final dis//
Fuck you dumb ass you ain't shit like this//


hey man just cause u never heard of me, doesnt mean beating me is goin to be easy
they should call me hurrican the way i talk so breezy

man this was a hot battle 4 real, saint u came harder than i thought u would, but ur bars were stretched like mad crazy, this newb he came a lot harder than i thought he would also so ima break it down like this

punches-real
multi's-saint
metas'saint
complexity-real
creativity-real
comedy-real
enjoyment-both
overall-real

sik ass battle ya'll, no hate, stay up

im out
pz
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vote- saint....i thot he came harder when i read his stuff i felt it more......better flow.....no hate......1

hit up ma battle.....wit a poll vote...thx....1

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...6725#post716725

when I unleash the beast in my lyrics there's no Damage-Control, I'm a Savage-With-Blows!/{1}
when thrown they'll Ravage-Ur-Soul! u couldn't 'spit on point' if I Stabbed-Thru- Ur-Throat!/{2}
1st blah, 2nd not to blah

the wrath of my Tongue's-Fury, will leave u 'without the decision'..somethin like a Hung-Jury!/{3}
ur rhyme's speech is like a whore gobblin cuz u 'Cum-Slurry'! yo Dun'-Worry..I'll be swift when I Crumble-Ur-Words!/{4}
blah but 2nd hit kinda

I 'hold this shit' down while ur 'Fumblin-Turds'! I Trip, Kick, and Stumble-Up- Herbs!/{5}
my lyrics make 'people stop' and humbles Those-Actin-Out-Quick-Verbs! I make 'jaws drop' like Reactions-To-Bit-Curbs!/{6}
1st blah, 2nd made NO sense

ur spits?..I'm 'barely feelin it' like Crack-When-Split-Thirds! I Stay-True-To-Form while ur Gay-Crew-Gets-Torn!/{7}
u've Slayed-Fewer-Than-More! ur raps are garbage! whad u Engrave-Sewers-For- War?/{8}lol
1st blah and 2nd was not a lol

this kid's a joke wantin to Beef-With-The-Best I'll leave ur lungs to Leak-Out-Ur- Chest!/{9}
kid u couldn't 'Reach' me like molar Teeth-With-Some-Crest, keep 'talkin pussy!' and soon u'll be Queefin-Ur-Breath!/{10}lol
1st blah, 2nd descent

NEXT

im comin hard, and thats wit an exclamation//
when u say u blowin tha spot, i didnt think u was dick suckin a dalmation//
You're played like my five-year old's newborn toys//
Don't know shit about Chicago, but I could still make Illa Noyz//
I'm sick of this, here's my final dis//
Fuck you dumb ass you ain't shit like this//
Only quotes

Overall, Saint Came Better, Its Obvious, But skiddlez you had some descent lines to be as new as you are, and im 'assuming' you are with your bar structure and other stuff thats noticable of a newbie, but u got potential, maybe next time. But Vote Saint

Saint's improved.. other kat shoulda came harder on this cuz saint blew it away.. fix your bar structure..

Vote - saint

^Word saint has improved good shit....
other cat.... good disses.. some was funny but no real structure

still il breakdown

flow - saint
personals - real
punches - saint
meta's - saint
comedy - real lol jus added that in
wordplay - saint

saint got this by far i aint gone lie...

Are yall nuts

Flow-Real
Punches-Real (that dalmation line killed saint)
Multis-Saint
Meta's-Tie

Overall real got this. But you real you have a newbie strutcture. Change your structure up and you'll prolly get more respect.

Real was Wack!

The saint came throw wit nice vocab and flow

yo man just try and cum up wit more meta's and simlies aight

Nice multies dog

Vote-Saint

Other kid-Elivate

yo saint can u return the favour and vote on this, tyanhks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73175

man u aint bet me u is dick riddin like a lil bitch who just discovered dick and u bit that first line cause i have seen that shit b4 u bitter ass dick ridden bitch man we want to battle on the real tip tell me and i am goin tpo find where i saw that and i am goin to copy and paste it so ppl and see it

^^Word. nice batte......and agree on the punches , dalmation was the killer......for saint...Vote=REal

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