5-20 lines
you first
no feedin or bitin
no dr h c votes
dont take too long

k no problem, writin my verse should be done in 5-10 mins...yeah this will be my last battle probably so, lets make it tyte

Spittin flamezzzzz

im the ~king~ of this ~chapel~, I win in this ring, you ~fruity~ like ~snapple~/
after this battle, your going to be ~sour~ like a ~crab apple~/
I come ~equipt~ with a ~base-ball bat~, your record status is like a ~batting average~/
turn you into a ~vegtable~ and and place your body in seaweed lookin like ~cabbage~/
take a moment to rest my ~hot lines~, while you spit non-stop ~weak rhymes~/
beat you over and over to show you the real meaning of hard times/
if we woulda battled in the begining you wouldn't be here in the first place/
you aint taking first place, cause you just like Garbage.... A WASTE/
~BRING ON THE FINAL PUNCHEZ~.......

bow and take off your hat-quick, I'll score atleast a ~Hat trick~/(votes)
cause you on a Mid-career crisis like your name is Dominik Hasek/
Like ~henry ford~ you going to die so ya acivements will be un~EXPLORE~d/
got you ~falling~&~DIVING~ cause ya rhymes is like ~fish~ in a tank..~BOARD~/
Lyrically my rhymes kicked you to the ~Ground~ to give you a MUD ~BATH~/
~ADD~ a ~LOSS~ to your ~SHADY~ ass and you aint worth ~50CENT~ ~AFTER MATH~/
as I ignite you in ~flames~ set to ~BOMB~ six will call you a ~TRAGIC-WICK~/
if you was a ~majician~ cop and i was ~rodney king~ you couldn't beat me with a ~magic-stick~/
i'll ~eat your whole crew~, while i drink brew and end up getting ~limb-shit's~/
ya a sixshot illegal ~ALIEN~ out your tourney boundries call that ~outer-limits~/
this ~shy~ ~kid~ who ~ONLY~ likes ~guys~ is ~taking it~ he in his ~ANAL phase~/
but hypothetically if he ~prefered girls~ even if he was ~FRITO~ he wouldn't get ~LAYS~/

newbie who...

you bought 20 cans of axe and found out it dont work with cats/
your life aint goin now where like ridin with flats/
you think you a rebel cause you step on peoples door mats/
and dont fit a job application cause it dont got "suckin off rats"/

goldnchild aint worth while,i'll rip out ya organs and drink ya vile/(guts)
your 25 and still cant watch 8 mile, cause ya live with ya mom cause ya carreer aint nuthin but a shit pile/
ugly ass could kill anyone with a smile,shot a dead man and thought you was gonna be on death trial/
even if you did kill 100 men your not walkin the green mile/(death row)

you couldnt spit hot shit if you was the sun/and i could kill you with a cold spit i did for fun/
couldnt rap if you bit off of big pun/i'll put bullets in ya brain and have you eatin lead, while you still at toys R' us pickin out a gun/with a simple shot in the hand..and your done/

cut ya wrists and have you cryin in pain/take out ya juggular and have you gaspin for air but you know your slain/

your the fruit and im the picker, and you gonna get eaten/i put a "bat" to this "man" and he gonna rhyme like micheal keaton/

micheal keaton played batman.....ok that was bad but i was eating so w/e

goldn child got dis

his flow was good, nice punches and multies
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wall ur structure is off a little and it fucked wit ur flow but u have sum good shit in ur verse though

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I got next. the winner is neither. I wish not to battle the weakers of you to i just wish to battle step up to take wins not to loose bring elavation to the game to score on the boards of death for the first time im back
(with great strain i vote wallbanger the award for a win because of excellent cadency)

^^WORD^^.. no hate no dr... honest vote.. yea.. i do quote alot... waste of typin if sum already said what i was gonna say so dont get it twisted... peace

cmon quit sleepin on this yall get some votes I need to get votes on my battles...cmon quit sleepin i hate this damn 100 character shit

VOTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.......... .................................................. .............................................!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

damn lets get this battle finished its been on here too long......VOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEE please