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Old 08-24-03, 09:32 PM   #1
Verbatim
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Shit off my chest

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check it
yo
listen

"find out the truth, before you accuse me of shit" (you said it)
go ahead say you hate me, i didn't do it
ask anyone who was there, and they'll agree
that i didn't say fuck, it wasn't fuckin me
i'm serious this is bullshit, but whatever fuck it
i'm done apologizing , for shit i didn't commit
believe me or not, it doesn't really matter
"i don't have a heart" cause it was shattered
not once! but 3 damn times
you wonder why i'm an asshole sometimes
ya you created me, when we dated
cause right now all i feel is hatred
i was trying to be your friend
i was trying to comprehend
all this fuckin bullshit wasn't intended
but now these lyrics are fully expended

the fuck i made people hate you
bullshit it's BULLSHIT! , come on tell me who
don't talk to me ever again, see if i care
i'll just keep bein an asshole, it's only fair
by the way your little friend was askin questions bout you
"anything i should know about her" yeh he asked that too
i told him nothing, absolutely nothing!
"come on dude tell me something"
i said, "no you can find out for youself
i'll let her tell you herself"
so whatever he said that i said is a lie
cause i never told him shit, whatever BYE!

uppin
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Old 08-24-03, 10:36 PM   #2
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i guess the new theme is to get out your frustrations on RB.

none the less, i like what you were saying but while reading it i was beggin for an extra rhyme per line. You got your message across (damn those women) but if your in a crew then you should be showing us newbies how to flow

none the less good job
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Old 08-24-03, 10:59 PM   #3
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kinda basic....but all in all it was agreat emotional piece had a easy flow but worked...you cud easily elivate this...juz rwead it over an dont let your emotions eat yah up peace
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