Ayo
this next rhyme, is dedicated to a certain girl i used to know..
I ain't forget bout you, i still remember

(beat...eminem's I Remember)
(Singing)

There once was a girl that i used to know (used to know)
but she got all pissed and turned to a hoe (to a hoe)
So she put the k***e down and picked the pencil up (picked the pencil up)
then she started writing rhymes like there was no tomorrow (no tomorrow)
figured she could hurt me in the rap game (the rap game)
it was the dumbest decision she ever made (ever made)
but the dumbest thing she could ever do (could ever do)
was try to maybe diss jamie for trying to act shady
tell me now whatchu gonna do (now whatchu gonna do)

Cause i remember all those tears
how it was when you were there
i remember how it was, how it was when i was young
now that was so long ago (long ago)
Me and you came along now
i don't wanna hear from your bitch ass no more

I remember when you were just a friend (just a friend)
and i remember when we came to an end (to an end)
i was right there being pissed off at you (pissed off at you)
i just wish i wasn't ever with you (ever with you)
maybe my friends are right, you are a bitch (you are a bitch)
you came around when you needed shit and you leave when you got it bitch (when you got it bitch)
but the dumbest thing she could ever do (could ever do)
was try to maybe diss jamie for trying to act shady
tell me now whatchu gonna do (now whatchu gonna do)

Cause i remember all those tears
how it was when you were there
i remember how it was, how it was when i was young
now that was so long ago (long ago)
Me and you came along now
i don't wanna hear from your bitch ass no more

yo (yo) yo (yo) yo (yo)
(rapping)

Remember back in 02, like right before me and you were fuckin through
before you knew how much i fuckin hated you
when i got in the rap game you thought it was lame
like i was lookin for someone to fuckin blame
now look at you dissin me
who the fuck you trying to be
you can't rap, so don't even try
this had to be done, i had to reply
or even further back, when your first wrote your rap
you had to of known i was gonna write back
your poetry is good and i'll admit to it
but you can't rap, so don't even do it
how could you diss me bitch?
i didn't do shit
i liked you, thought you was alright for a poet
dissin me for shit is bullshit, just want you to know it
i got all kinds of shit on you
i could diss you to fuck if i wanted too
but i ain't even mad at you,
hell i'd be mad at me too, if i was goin through what your going through
I said i was cool with the guy, what don't you understand
i can't control what "nick" does, he is his own man
if he wants to beef with the guy, what the fuck can i do
you want me to tell him to chill, just cause you told me too
look i can't do shit, so just let it be
if you wanna blame someone, go ahead and blame me
but everytime i write a lyric, i'mma think of you
and maybe that help me kno what it's like..to sing the blues

Cause i remember all those tears
how it was when you were there
i remember how it was, how it was when i was young
now that was so long ago (long ago)
Me and you came along now
i don't wanna hear from your bitch ass no more

Cause i remember all those tears
how it was when you were there
i remember how it was, how it was when i was young

edited it, added some shit
uppin

..well in my opinion,the singing part was better,I was seeing what you was tryin to do,when you repeated the words.Like a kind of echo effect,or like what Cam'ron be doing...a lil more info should have been givin out ,a lil more details about why she started to diss you.....the rap part just sucked...it did...I give this a 7/10

hmm i agree with him ^ should tell them more about why the hell i dissed you, not just that one night that topped it off, the whole thing, about you becoming some1 that scared the shit out of me after we broke up, bout you and your little friend nick wanting to beat his ass, bout all the cheating that ppl are saying i did, bout everything, it would sound good eh LATER ~ THAT CERTAIN GIRL~

PS. dont make me try to look like a leach like i sucked all the poor help out of you, i was there to help you too you know that but you never opened up to me to even give me a fuckin chance

PSS did you ever hear me say you trying to get in the rap game was lame? it hurt when it use to be about me, but hey it gets stuff off your chest, instead of knocking ppl out right

PSSS WHO AM I TRYING TO BE? im not trying to be anybody, i am one girl whos sick of everything and everybody right now, and your lucky cause your the center of my attention right now

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yeh well
what can ya do
thanks for the feedback

keep uppin

If it hurt you that much dog, you should of put in more feelin in the lyrics. Peace

i think u got the wronge message
but meh

its alright, wernt feeling it dat much but the concept was good.



fave line outta da whol ting

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