I never imagined this world could get so cold,
Its like my dreams were shattered once i got old,
once i became a man i started to slip off my feet,
Like i was on thin ice in 99 degrees heat,
melting underneath i got nowhere to go
As if i was on a dead end waiting for it to snow,
waiting for my life to catch up with me
I just sit here and wait i dont need your sympathy,
I can hold my own like i was geronimo
2 glocks by my waist but i dont need them no more,
I used to hold them up without hesitating,
but now i throw em down like i was meditating
I dont need to be straped to prove my life story
I dont need glory to be ill all i need is my 40

(chorus) dam this life got tough its rough
I cant get enough im like what
burning the paper like im burning the haters
there traitors they cant mess with slip
their not worth my time i slit there wrist to their mind
leave them scarred for life im the type these critics want to bar
im tight*

As i grew older i started to realize alot of shit,
like having my dreams wasent enough i gotta do it
pursue them like cops and robbers on the flop
Fuel my dreams,like my regal and never stop
If I ever had another chance i woulnt of been on rice st.
Cuz all the beef got me going in circles i want to leave
so bad but i never had the chance to
Haters would lurk and the police tried to run thru
looking for whatever we had coming with a force
Leaveing so fucking mad cuz i had nothing of course
I smoked it all up while they were making there plans
sitting in their vans with their blueprints understand
I have nothing to lose i already lost everything i could
my money my mind dont give a fuck but i know i should

(chorus) dam this life got tough its rough
I cant get enough im like what
burning the paper like im burning the haters
there traitors they cant mess with slip
their not worth my time i slit there wrist to their mind
leave them scarred for life im the type these critics want to bar
im tight*

Its just another white niqqa from the 612
holding it down,acting like a straight fool
With my middle fingers way up there
Let the critics stare,cuz i dont play fair
Im a one man legion,leave mc's bleeding
screaming like i was a fucking demon
so hot my semon's leaveing mc's crisp
you know anyone ill well bring them shit
I dont need no punchlines or no help
I make up freestyles that make ur dawgs yelp.
So cold the snow doesnt deliver as many colds as me
I give em out for free and pass them out like candy

(chorus) dam this life got tough its rough
I cant get enough im like what
burning the paper like im burning the haters
there traitors they cant mess with slip
their not worth my time i slit there wrist to their mind
leave them scarred for life im the type these critics want to bar
im tight*


i lost to many homiez give them a pour
I lost to many freinds i cant lose no more
They all got shot up ive counted 104
So many funerals made me pissed
so many deaths up in the mist
i guess my concept does make cents
I can predict the future but not the presense

DECENT META'S
WORDPLAY LACKED A LIL
GOOD CONCEPT
DELIVERED WELL
OVER ALL 7.5/10
KEEP ELIVATEN YOU GOT THE POTENTIAL TO DO GREAT WORK

Pretty deep man...
had some good metaphors up in there kid...
It could have had better flow, but thas aight...
and yo, some lines didn't quite rhyme together...
thas just me thought... -1-

quote :Pretty deep man...
had some good metaphors up in there kid...
It could have had better flow, but thas aight...
and yo, some lines didn't quite rhyme together...
thas just me thought... -1-

was a good piece keep it up 1

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