10-15 lines a quick battle
u drop first
il start a key when u check in
pc
check innnnnnnnnnn

no crew votes no d/r votes
so on

checkin in
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Skill boy your whole 'gangster image' is fiction/
and Skill, nah ur names a contradiction/
watch, i beat u senseless with great affliction/
and i wear u down like the liver of a man with alcohol addiction/
u never make cash off ur rhymes cos they do nothing but bore/
i rule wack emcees like u, like im ur pimp and ur my whore/
actin black spittin fiction challenging me to a rap fight/
wheras ur dim im bright i burn bright like Carbon white/
u into rap because of Eminem think u a deep fan cos u listen to Nas/
u listen rap cos its popular, u sheep if it was popular ud switch to modern jazz/
listenin to Ems words like they the bible, u the real life stan/
wannabe black, u aint nothin more than a white kid with a sun tan/

Short and quick like u wanted, u hard to battle cos u only posted 4 times,

^^ i think eminems gay he has like 2 songs that are aite
i bum underground shit sum pac bone thugs
meesy marv broth lynch c- bo
t nutty nut
u NEEDA THROW MORE PERSONALS KID If u wanna eat me

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Since my immaculate conseption i've been busting flows at a challengers direction..King i'll put ya intestines in my nap sack
after i open ya mid-section should of learned ya leason//
SKILLZ aint the one you should battle soon as your verse is posted i start to dismantle with my mic handle skills is ample..i'll
chop you up then cook you up and pass you out like some samples//
you the type to stay behind when ya home-boys ride your block credits been "denied" null and void a perpatrator slash instagater...we cant coinside//
i'm Killin this nigga gets more dick then lil kim kneeling..beat you with ya limbs take ya head and start peeling//
destroying this fools nerves worse then mulitple sclerosis so sick i'm lible to nail ya ass to a crucifix STIGMATA my blood boils
when i spit nobody HOTTA patna i'm big all i can say after this is "Who Shot Ya" does your dad know he got a daughter?//
well i "dunno know what to say" time to find god and pray you's a fraud and secretly gay...H.I.V. got you screaming out
"STEVE" you aint nothing but a P.U.S.S.Y. why even try you wasting ya time..//
Magazines sent to ya spline within a rhyme scheme got you runnin up an incline..i'm crazy cut off ya cranium just to see whats on ya mind/

OUTro key style switch to mwek this cat

This Merkin gunna be easy but slow, a fosho win makin me 1-0//
Ill blaze this herb after i blow, u cant beat me if u bit my lines King HO//
U cudnt spit rite if u switched lanes to the other side of ya roads//
YA RHYMes comin slow like 50 ya verse bouta yeild an explode//
Reppin shefield u erally dont no wut u facin u a disgrace kid/
ILL be like a doctor an handle these patients,plasterin them to da pavment//

UPpin for sum vote.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .

uppin 4 sum votes in here more voters////////
anyone c mon i wanna get this shit over wit eeven if i loose
uppinnnnnnnnnn

can sumone hit this battle up been mad slepted on
my boy told me u guys got alot of voters
i dont see any
damn
uppin for sum votes.............sorry i cant hit ya shit up i dont have enuff post it says

this battle will give new beaning to the term "one-sided"
Vote=$k!ll
better flow punches wordplay structure etc
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obviously skills won but ur not quite as good as u think

ur flo is way off ur lines are way stretched out u got punches n wordplay but u need to get rid of all those fillers words and shorten ur verse to a nice neat paragraph and get to tha point quicker it makes ur punches and style much more effective and outstanding.......um...........ya

vote $kill

like ur keystyel that was good make ur whole verse look like that

EXACTLY skill GO CHECK IN OUT BATTLE an pepare to losse

Yo ill Post a honest one here but only if i can get some votes here............ i am done votin and not gettin peeps to vote on mine........................................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76048

peace

u shdu be banne for tthat that aitne aloowed fool i shud do sum mod work before i get banned
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhuh

no doubt............................................. ........

UPPin on a few more voters./...where em at
the voting ill voteo n shit but i can tpoll it ssorry
so uppino n both sides
end thsi shit