10-12 lines
no crew/hate/dr
no biting no feeding
spit immediatly

immediatly as in one right after another im sick of ppl prewriting........................................ .................................................. ...............................

u spit first............................................. .................................................. ..........................................

jus uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................

Ur writings like a felony, everythin u say is stale
Send u to court, the judge puts ur ass in jail
Get in the shower and drop ur soap on "purpose"
Bend over, look up and say "Bubba come 'Work This'"
Ur worthless, u go to the olive garden, ask the waiter to "toss ur salad"
Take him home, put him on ur bed and sing him a love ballad
Talked to ur girl last night, she said ur dick was so small it was "scary"
She said u fukked her 20 times and still couldn't pop her "cherry"
My rhymes invade ur mind like "telekenetics"
Radioactive rhymes that fukk up ur "genetics"
Spit cold words, leaving u phrozen in your "track" (ur rhyme)
Leave your mouth "shitty" like smokin to much "crack" (like butt crack)

you walk around like your the shit of this place
but they call you "Defaced" cause your a discrace to your race
but its my fault
cause i broke the rubber,blew a nut up in your mother
and thats how you got here you little mother fucker
your lyrics are "Phrozen" so listen to my flows then
you little fake ass punk your jus posin
talkin bout my dick cause your insecure
makes me feel like i won this battle for sure
an bubba wasnt that the fucka you chase screamin HUBBAHUBBA
so im outta here now
im goin to rape your motha and give you a little brotha,sucka

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almost an even battle, but phrozen had a much better rhyme scheme, funnier punches, good vocab, all around well-written verse...

vote = phrozen

no beef though D

yo both hit this up w/ an honest vote:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76033

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uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ........................

yo Phrozen nice battle
uppin 4 votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................................

yea really phat battle dawg it was tight....still uppin............................................. ...............................................

good lines bout my mom ur rhymes were tight hopefully i get u if not no big loss it was a great battle. Peace
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