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Rapid_Lyrics 5 83.33%
24 karat 1 16.67%
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Old 08-29-03, 12:50 AM   #1
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Rapid Lyrics vs 24 Karat

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8 lines max... 4 lines min
no hate
no d/ring
no crew
no feeding
no biting
10 min afta check in
.......... i checkin in rite afta ya...
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Old 08-29-03, 12:58 AM   #2
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checkin in....................
blah blah blah blah blah blah
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Old 08-29-03, 01:01 AM   #3
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Old 08-29-03, 01:05 AM   #4
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aight im startin........................................... ..............................................
 
Old 08-29-03, 01:11 AM   #5
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Yo lyrics are as "rapid" as white water "rafting" flowin "up"//1
Your skillz are "vapid" "drafting", afta this battle over, gonna b worse then a "blood cup" (blood cup= a scarlet european fungus thats cup shaped)//2

In this battle its gonna b way ova a "tolerable degree", you'll have a new "necklace", around your neck and a lemon "tree"(hanging from a tree)//3
Your rhymes are like a "haunted house", their "terrifying" im juss "clarifying" that im "reckless", your shits "worth less" then a a "pakistani rupee"//4

Your from the "lameass" city named Edmonton capital of "Alberta", my punches will hit you fasta then "inertia"//5
Your shit sucks like "chemistry class", your gettin murked in this "rap game", juss like you did in "baccara" (baccarat- a card game played in casinos)//6

Your like a golden "marguerite" (a herb thats yellow) like no competition like sittin on a toliet "seat"//7
Okay...you got murked like a woman gettin raped on the "streets", its too late to "retreat", you've been burned by all this "heat"//8


its in 10 mins come on lol
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Old 08-29-03, 01:15 AM   #6
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been 20mins i'll give u 30 even tho thats cheap cuz i rote it in 10 min but i had to put quotations o well... not vote swayin homes
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Old 08-29-03, 01:25 AM   #7
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crew might browse at u nigga but they would "rather me" bitch aighnt no one bitten u cuz they would still be "hungry" like they in 3rd world country livin in "poverty"/
im the lyrical god now niggas come a "praise me" like an hour hand on the clock this nigga gets droped twice "daily"/
look at yeah nigga what special "about yea" bitches callin him a cow the way he makes beef and hicks be jerkin cream "out yea"/
holy shit dawg this nigga be "hopeless" he could smoke a pound of pot take a blood sample this bitch still "dopeless"nigga just aighnt right..like if the roman catholics where "popeless"/
runnin outa time nigga u betta "rush" nigga has more fillas then a grampa wit no "toothbrush"/
this fagget already knows hes commin "last"niggas think hes a garbage wit all those condoms up his "ass"/

sorry i took so long i was watchin tv and forgot.....
 
Old 08-29-03, 01:27 AM   #8
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Old 08-29-03, 02:09 AM   #9
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uppin............................................. ..............uppin............................... .........(_) []D []D [] []\[]
 
Old 08-29-03, 02:45 AM   #10
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Old 08-29-03, 02:58 AM   #11
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erm....flowin from the both of yall were all over the place.....maybe its just me.....

but... With punches,wordplay and a bit of metas....i reckon that rappid took it...!!

Vote...rappid....

anyway...can eithe 1 of u 2 vote at our battle...peace..!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76423
 
Old 08-29-03, 03:14 AM   #12
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Hmm, both of your flows were Choppy. The ryme scheme wasnt too good. but 24 Karat..you tried alotta wrodplay, some hit good some really didnt...but allmost every line you attempted to do that. Your punches were ok, but they weren't really personals or anything that stood out to me. you have a phat avy tho..lol


rapid, your flow had a little better flow. But the ryme scheme wasnt that good. in my opinion.
you had a few lines that were funny...

im the lyrical god now niggas come a "praise me" like an hour hand on the clock this nigga gets droped twice "daily"/

and...

holy shit dawg this nigga be "hopeless" he could smoke a pound of pot take a blood sample this bitch still "dopeless"nigga just aighnt right..like if the roman catholics where "popeless"/


those were your best lines...
close battle, but this one goes to Rapid..
sorry i cant POLL vote yet, but i aint a NEWB.


Fuckin Sleepers…(Poll)

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2405#post742405

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76279
 
Old 08-29-03, 03:16 AM   #13
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yeh i think rapid got dis easy wid everything.....
vote=rapid

can u hit my battle honestly up wid nick.o.teen...
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Old 08-29-03, 03:31 AM   #14
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Originally posted by Dr.SeusS
Hmm, both of your flows were Choppy. The ryme scheme wasnt too good. but 24 Karat..you tried alotta wrodplay, some hit good some really didnt...but allmost every line you attempted to do that. Your punches were ok, but they weren't really personals or anything that stood out to me. you have a phat avy tho..lol


rapid, your flow had a little better flow. But the ryme scheme wasnt that good. in my opinion.
you had a few lines that were funny...

im the lyrical god now niggas come a "praise me" like an hour hand on the clock this nigga gets droped twice "daily"/

and...

holy shit dawg this nigga be "hopeless" he could smoke a pound of pot take a blood sample this bitch still "dopeless"nigga just aighnt right..like if the roman catholics where "popeless"/

yeah nice for 10 minutes but he took this one on ya kid vote rapid

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2405#post742405

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76279
 
Old 08-29-03, 04:01 AM   #15
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This battle was hard to vote on but o.k.Rapid
had the punchlines and flow and 24 had the
wordplay and complexity.Good battle to both
but Rapid got my vote.

24's verse was hard to read and flow was way off.

No hate though.

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