ok dawg... u called me out...
10 lines (12 max)
usual vote rules
u spit first
dont take forever
ok...
spit nigga...

Chekkin In Gangsta...

I'll drop in a Half an Hour!^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Look...


(Y)our Career Is Over, Youngin, You Finally Met our~Death~Wish...
(O)ver Anxious To Win, But Fail, Your Gassed Over~This~Net~Shit...
(U)nder Estimated Is Trav, Ur Flow Is~Prenatle, Here's The End Of Young's~Legacy...
(N)ovice "Premeditated"~His Flow, So his Bars Can Try To "Rise" Up Ahead~Of~Me...
(G)angster's Are born, this Nigga Flows States He's Genetically~Cloned...
(P)remature Faggot, Carrying Alotta "Gay~Topping" Than a "Pizza ~P-Zone"...(Meat)

FINISHER...

Still A Virgin? Phobeia For Women, They Try to Rub~and~You~Leak...?(Scared Of sex)
Instead You Run In "Meat~Markets" so You can "Slaughter~Your~Beef"?...(Jerk Off)

Nigga Dont Have a Flow, So He Decided to Become a Rhyme~Scheme~Thief"...
I'll Step In Acid, And "Put My Foot in Ya Mouth" So You can
Get a "Taste~Of~Da~FEET"...(Taste Defeat)

YO YOUNG, I WISH U ALL THA ELEVATION TO BEAT THIS GASSED FEMCEE LOL

OH YEA TRAV TRY NOT TO RECYCLE, YOU CANT KEEP THAT UP TIL 70'S & I THOUGHT YOU RETIRED

YA RECORD ABOUT TO BE 33 LIKE EWING'S KNICKS JERSEY PUSSY

!~WuN~!

BROOKLYN JUMP OFF MY DIKK NIGGA

LOL

HAHA

LOL

EMCEE'S KNOW HOW TO VOTE HONESTLY...
SO...

Trav's punches got no effect, like a blond hair kid usin sun in//
While Young's gunnin...i cant stop, he scared, even got his sentences runnin// (run on sentences)
He always limits lines ta nines, so he feel like he handle da heat//(nine lines-a nine)
I vandle da beef, call himself equipped so i dismantle dis geek//
And da way he shit outta luck, ya would think his diet consist of four leaf clovers//
It's ova...wont even stoop ta ya level, it's like a grizzly ta a goafer//
No ruler needed, da measures are drastik... dont get ya ass kicked//
Wit more stretch marks den elastic, recycled more den plastic//
Holdin back...infact...it's scared he seems, baring reems//
Beat me would need quotes...try "dare ta dream"//

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UPPP'NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

I wasnt really feelin Travs, but he had personals, but P's verse was jsut more well rounded, he had flow and all that ish, only thing Trav had going was personals and thats very unbalanced

Vote - Young P

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yea... i kinda felt i needed personals but derre wuz nothin to use and i didnt feel like lookin for his picture or anything... thanx dawg

p took this with punches, vocab.......overall a more complex verse in my opinion
vote=young p
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77046

yah i def agree wit this ..... NO HATE DAWG .. PROPS TO BOTH.

recycled more den plastic//
^
LMAO

=TRAV= PLAYED ENDING, FLOWED OK FOR A NAME DISS BUT NOTHING PERSONAL, PUNCHED WITH A BASIC STYLE

YOUNG=GOOD CONSISTENCY, PERSONAL & FLOW
NOTHING STOOD OUT BUT IT HAD LESS FILLER & STRAIGHT TO THE POINT

VOTE-YOUNG P

VOTE - YOUNG P

REASON - Betta punches nd flow in my eyes...trav's got a lil borin...good battle

vote honestly on dis: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77046
PEACE