no bitin
no feedin
no d.r.
no crew
no hate
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alrite i'm here spit 33 3333

You're locked up like a bird, so i'll rattle your cage,
i'm full of rage and ready to engage my merk stage/
I'll assign hurt, you gon' need to realign your spine,
i should of declined your invite, cause you trippin59/ (for the 59th time)
You're whack to choose such a name in this game,
i call you dogg, because you begging for fame/
Wanted me to spit first so you could rewrite your verse,
but i'ma still immerse my curse cause to you i diverse/
Even though i'ma end this shit it's really just begun,
because my flow was even phatter than Big Pun/

aight dogg, it's your turn!
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NARD ya must be nerd
thats y u smell like u just ate a turd
yo rap is absurd call it hip-hop but ya know its a flop
bout to rip ya in apart wind comes blow ya away like a fart
what ya don't see is my pshcotic tendancies
if i fight u i might end up with rabies
or if i fuck ur mom i'll end up with herpies
oh well i'll trade climidia hope it gets rid if ya
and u think i'm a dogg beggin for fame
at least i'm not sniffin ass sayin i'm not gay

uppin on this y'all!
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Come on...this is my 4th UPPIN and still not a single vote yet!
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Hey man, I don't have enough posts to hit up that poll vote, but I think NARD took this one. I like the play on the name "trippin59" and I like the one in your verse too, trippin, but I think NARD gets the gold on this one; it had better overall flow. Both sick rhymes, though. Keep that good shit up...

Hit this shit up... A battle between me and my next door neighbor, that's why there's no rules posted. We were just like fuck it, whatever comes out... Hit this up drop that thought...:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77400

yo the guy with the gay name gets it...just playin....nards punches were harder and better structure.....good battle

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UPPIN 4 THE LAST TIME>VOTE BECAUSE THIS IS MY 5TH UPPIN SO I WON'T BE ABLE TO DO ANY MORE AFTER THIS!
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Aight trippin, u gon have 2 try'n get sum votes. I can't UP anymore.
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