This Is My Take On How My Life Is At The Moment... (I Just Needed To Vent After A Few Things Came To My Attention)


Like 2 Pac Its Just Me Against The World
Always Ducking The Shit Thats Hurled
Born Wit A Pair Of Boxing Gloves
Like It Was A Message Sent From Above

Set It Up Dawg… Show All These People What It’s Like To Be You

Sometimes You Come Out Of Life On Top
Other Times You Feel Like Life Just Wont Stop
Saw My Life Through Others And Felt It Wasn’t Worth Saving
Few Weeks Back Had THe Life Everyone Was Craving
Then The World Started Buggin And Shit Hit The Fan
Not Gonna Be Like Last Time Where I Saw My Problems And Ran
Gonna Stand Up And Take This Shit Like A Man
You Just Don’t Know How Long The Days Seem
Life Aint Worth Living, It Seems Just 2 Crazy
Man Even My Dog Was Right There To Play Me
Come On Dawg, Im Looking Now Take The Knife
Is Shit Worth Staying.. Whats The Reason To My Life

Like 2 Pac Its Just Me Against The World
Always Ducking The Shit Thats Hurled
Born Wit A Pair Of Boxing Gloves
Like It Was A Message Sent From Above

Throw The Punchs At Those Fake Ass Players In The Game…

Fake Friends Try To Make Amends
See Right Through Their Shit
Already Been Through This Bit
Just A New Cast To Reflect The Past
Seems Like Lifes Moving Just To Fast
Just Waiting TO Beat The Feeling Out Of The Past
Should I Just Wait And Tempt Fate
Or Should I Take The Detour To Ignore The Debate
Living Through All This Pain And Disdain
Who Am I Supposed to Blame
When All The Characters Seem The Same
Should I Take My Pain Out On The Game
Cock The 9 Back Don’t Force Me To Attack
Load Up The Mack… Say You Want To Stab Me In The Back
Get Back At Everyone For Their Overdues
Leave This Shit All Over The News
Wanna Fuck With Me Now Dawg…?

Like 2 Pac Its Just Me Against The World
Always Ducking The Shit Thats Hurled
Born Wit A Pair Of Boxing Gloves
Like It Was A Message Sent From Above

What About That Girl… Uhhhh Whats Her Name….

Quit Playing I Know What Your Saying
What You Say It Just Aint Weighing…
You Said We’d Be Bonnie And Clyde Was There Something I Was Missing
Remove Her From The Picture Like A Long Lost Revision
This Aint Math But I’m Always Up For Division
Came Into This World As Just One
Thought I Would Multiply But Then That Was Undone
Going To Give You One Last Chance
Give Me A Call Then We Can Subtract Those Pants
Heres Your Last Chance To Get On Your Knees
Not To Beg For Forgiveness But To Suck On These

Like 2 Pac Its Just Me Against The World
Always Ducking The Shit Thats Hurled
Born Wit A Pair Of Boxing Gloves
Like It Was A Message Sent From Above

Like 2 Pac Its Just Me Against The World
Always Ducking The Shit Thats Hurled
Born Wit A Pair Of Boxing Gloves
Like It Was A Message Sent From Above

Lifes A Bitch, Fuck It...

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Can I Get Some Feedback Please

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*breathes in*
ok here we go
the flow was easy to find, and while reading it i made a stupid little beat in my head and it worked well... its a modification of Frontin' by the neptunes... anyways

Cuz Heres Your Last Chance To Get On Your Knees
Bitch Please Want A Piece Better Suck On These

easily the most played line i ever heard.. try to not use that one again.. besides that the originality was there and the approach was good 2.

the vocab could have been better... try to get a few more syllabulls per wor.. i think on average u had 3 syls as the highest.

other than that i liked it... 8/10

that that how you want

Thanks Alot Man, Ya It Was Just A Vent And Also I Updated Your Line YOu WEre Talking About It I Just Read Over It And It Hit Me, But Ya I Will Try Better Vocab If I Wasn't In A State Of Anger, Now I Cooled Off And Shits Good Again,
Uppin... For More Feedback...

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Okie This Is My 2nd Open Mic And I'd Appreciate It If I Could Get Some Feedback Please.. Word...

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yup...this was a nice drop...I wouldn't reply to it if it wasn't...had good flow and a good message...I liked it...can you do me a favor and hit up my 4 new open mics?????? feedback would be appreciated...

nice drop man real nice i liked it nice work

Yo.. Lets Up This One More Time To Get Some Final Feedback I Would Like If Comments Kept It Near The Top Instead Of Me Uppin It... Word...

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yo straight up you got a great concept style and way to convey this came with fire and burned anything in its' path.
only complaint verses were a lil short

Yo, I liked this drop and the way you came at it. I see you in the frontlines too, so keep all that shit up. Good Open Mic drop and the flow was there. Easy to get along with on the flow so points there.

Hey man, hit this shit up if you have the time:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77669

Okie.. I Want To Know If U Guys Think This Shit Was Ill Should I Try Another Or Just Stick To Battlin Or What Y'all Think?

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