thanx dawg much appreciated!!!

Hella Tite ''Shout out to ma dawg Bash,Thugzdocry,and all you kats in aNb.'' My name is in it ^^Werd,...Nah Nice Drop My Homie...Fo Real.......Nice Peace.....Holla.....

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ALIAS_C WAS RIGHT WITH HIS CRITIQUE
YOU USED A VERY COMPLEX RHYME TO CHARACTERIZE YOUR POINT.....

Demonic spells casting over tha world coz violence sells/
ozone layer collapse,war and bombings environmental damages and wrongings/
lost belongings,state of crisis and unwordly events/
UN and Nato prevents but still slaughters commence/

THAT WAS PHENOMINOL THE ADRESSING OF MULTIPLE SUBJECTS WITH IN ONE.I THOUGHT THAT DESERVED ILL QOUTABLE.

hiroshima and nagasaki a breakthrough but an example of earth bein scourned/
september the eleventh a date which will forever be mourned/
innocent death crisis tha devil is encorperated in terrorst acts/
666 tha mark of the beast and peoples loved ones deceased in Iraq/

VERY CONCIOUS AND ACCURATE

world war one German dictatorship caused sufferin to the german people/
"all heil Adolf" although he left his people starving yet he has a steeple/

SHOWS ANGER YET DESCRIPTIVE REALITY

world war two and continuation of deadly sins has tha world seperated/
families parted by prisoner of war camps and execution of jews also many were incarserated/
ten commandments formed "thou shall not kill" but still/
thousands upon thousands have been crucified at tha hands of others/
mary as our mother but still we can't think of each other as brothers/

THE MOST POWERFUL LINES IN THE FIRST VERSE GREAT COMPOSING AND THOUGHT.

b.c we had roman emperor killers and gladiators of tha likes of julius ceasar/
religion had people bein sacrificed for entertainment and leisure/
life ceasure,catholics and jews faught for tha right to preach to tha masses/
millions of people existed but fortune and power was only for upper classes/
NO COMENT IF I QOUTE IT YOU KNOW IT.

marvellous creations egyptians pyramids are a feat which cannot be matched today/
people worshiped sarcophigasses and tombs and mummified kings for which they prayed/
tha mongols ruled with an iron regime as genghus kahn was a mercyless killer/
an army of vikings roamed tha seas raping and piliging remembered as blood spillers/
napolean was an evil genius who wanted to dominate the entire nation/
Britain invaded over half tha world and slaughtered natives without hesitation/
ISTORY LESSON BUT YOU MADE TO WHERE I WANTED TO STUDY IT FOR MYSELF.
civil war in African continents jus adds to tha pain of tha hiv and aids outbreak/
sinniing is a contagious disease internally we must strive to live in harmony for god sake/
man made elements have given tha world it's meaning and allowed industry to flourish/
money,stock markets,technology so advanced yet drugs are used daily by people to nourish/
wrongs and rights have forever made up tha world in which we call our home/
like formation of stone,we must join together like particles and duplicate so we don't implode and be alone/
POWERFUL ENDING AND RIGHTEOUS YET BLASPHOMOUS VERY GOOD


OVER ALL THIS A 10 OUT OF 10 FLAWLESS SLEEPERS SHOULD BE PUT TO DEATH FOR NOT PAYING ATTENTION.

Yo thanx dawg,appreciate all ha feedback.

Peace

Uppin this baby.

that was a very tight drop...i enjoyed the flow, the topic was pure heat...i liked how you came with it...seemed ta have everything there...i liked it 1

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Thanx dawg.

This is sick cuzz........Nice shit...Nice concpet , ur wordplay was on fire , ur lyrics had great meaning to it , nice tittle , the Hook was sick...I can tell that you put alot of thought into this piece........I really liked your opening Line..............Demonic spells casting over tha world coz cfc's and violence sells/
^^^^Nice shit right there..........................................I.E repping to the fullest.....................a.N.b