BREAKDOWN

crip man all those ~ don make it a good verse.....it juz lengthens it an makes peps not like it as much...we aint dumb
fav lines:you ~came~ weaker than ya bitch when ya ~fucked her~
i'll beat ya to da point ya speech is slurred. ~fucked wit ya eyes~ like ~magic tricks~ now even ya vision is blurred.//3
it was good but not to impressive

other kid- also nuttin to amazing, but i thought overall urs had beda kick to it...*shrugs* more constant in ya flow an such
fav lines-Erasin Shit Ya Spray Leave Ya Blanked Lyrically Scorch This Kat Cos i Blaze With Shit I Say // Bar 1
Ya Punches Couldnt Stick If Ya Hands Were Soaked in Glue Ya Choake n Spew Like Happy Meals Handed By Hitler' To Provoke His Jews //Bar 2

all in all both could use some elevation but i gotta vote fo that toxic kid

uppin....even though this shit is bein dickridden SO FUCKIN hard. and when they do find out you dickridin, they gon' ban ALL YA'LL MUH"FUCKIN ASSES!