Yep it's a battle:

Rulz:
10-20 Lines
No crew, hate, d/r votes.
No feeding.
No biting.
No recycling.
No editing.
BLIND SPIT.

Easy enough, check in and pst when yuou done with your spit and we will post thme at the same time.

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Uhh dude are you going to check in or not, if you don't want to battle thne just tell me, your the one that challanged me.

Alright nevermind my above post thne, thanks for checkinn.......................................... ......

yeah ill battle you i checked didn't i... and it was your call out so technical you're challenging but... it's whatever... you wanna drop tonight??

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Yeeh man, I already got my spit written ,I just finsihed it, so you cna get going to.,,,,,.........................................

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5-10 Bars = 10-20 Lines
So when are you going yo be done with yours? Try to get it done within 10-20 minutes.

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Spitten shit on his chin, this fagot trying to clobber me, with that ooze he gonna slobber me/
Archeologists found his spits in anicet times, but back then they actually were rhymes/
Boy stop baggering, under the pressure of my spits it's got your ass staggering/
Your floding under pressure, doing this to you giveing me grat pleasure/
Got you sitting in the corner crying, spillen tears pictureing you mom and dad dieing/
Nope you aint gonna win, compared to my dictionary of rhymes, this bitchs is paper thin/
I'm gonna let you start over, fuckin lepracon I caught you fucken a 4 leaf clover/
Horny little bitch getting jiggy wit his cat, mom's got worried so they gave him a cat-er-ac/
Presenting the herb of the year, your rolling on rims while I got some goodyears/
Get back up and stop gagging, you have invted a new style of spit, it's faggin/
Yeah I saw ya jackin your dentist off, putting floride in your ass to clean your fucked ass off/
Splattering you weak medaly, dude if you call that rap you commited a felony/
Slam your ass begind bars, got your rommated name it's Big Bubba Lard/
Ooops you dropped the soap again brainy, man your ass is getting lose, plainly/
Big Bubba is takeing care of you alright, yeah the guards saw you giving a BJ all night/
I know you rubbing yourself reading this, so go to the back and take a fake piss/[whack]
Man if they let you out that will be the day, you can join Elton John and be gay/
A brainsurgeon got a doctirite in dick ridin, slidin you dick into there ass, slip-slidin/
Your brainless and you know it, when you rap comes up you will show it/
This is lines 20, beggin me not to take your lunch money, leave you hands sticky, honey/



I hope my lines turned out alright, I would be pissed if they dident.

You better drop 1 minute or less after this.

I imploy-this-kid, withdraw-your-SPIT!!.. An insensitive vet, D.. 'Cause I'll "destroy-this-BITCH!!!!
Maul-this-geek!!.. You only "fought-the-weak".. Retards like yourself! I expect you TO-COME-WITH-SHIT!!!!
You aint hot!!.. Quick??.. Better run, bitch!!.. The lyrics use truth for blunt instruments!!.. And CHOP-PRICKS!!!!
You couldn't torch wick! Couldn't flow piss, handin' out mixtapes, bitch YOU WOULDN'T "DROP HITS"!!!!
So cop-this.. I establish-dominion!!.. Could tear ya' eyes, but you already "LOST SIGHT-OF-SICK-COMPETITION"!!!!
Shove "the to do list" in your skull.. My abuse's "a-daily operation"!! Sell tiolets??.. Need innovative-occupations!!!!
For the duration of this game!!.. You'll be terminated!!.. Mutilated!!.. You need to "TAKE-A-BREAK"!!!!
You're cheeky!!.. I'll-tear-ya-ass.. Extract-the-arteries.. Make an "art" exhibitions.. YOU DON'T "DISPLAY-HATE"!!!!
I'll core-wreck-this-fag.. Repress-this-gaffe!!.. With D under STOOD, like army flankers, I'll "sir-cum-vent-this-fan"!!!!
Molest-ya-blast!!.. An "anti-diss-establishmentarian"! I'll "a-vert"-silence, like tight X-GAME board tricks!
Watch this impressed-kid-clap!!!!

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I'll strike with the left.. Shake with the right... This joke aint-"stunning-me"!!!!
My punchlines come sick with Creudzfeldt Jakob!!.. Look Muthafucka..You aint-"-serving-B"!!!!
What?? Like billboard #41s, kid, the brainsurgeon "ignores-ya-hit", you bore-and-flimse!!!!
Your verse can't "hold attention" like broke radio stations!!!! Deadly??.. You even bore-the-stiff!!!!
Like heat seeking missiles detouring-him.. How your stupid ass'll sites "miss-the-target"!!!!!
Your crew is full of bitches, but there's more in you!!.. Dead?? After IT, they won't miss-this-faggott!!!!
I killed yo' ass.. Then remove your tongue.. Have this reclusive obtuse suffer-in-silence!!!!
Sick Niggaz?? I drop in heaps!!.. Use for Mount-Ills (mantles).. After I slaughter-the-chalice!!!!

Uhh alright sure, that was a pretty good drop. I dident read all of it becaused it confused me halfway through, well less thne that. Where is your structure dude, adjust that and you can win way more battles.

Good verse though, so lets get some votes.