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Old 09-04-03, 02:43 AM   #1
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gimme the mic

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gimmie the mic and take a rest so i can supress all this stress thats on my chest by blessin it...
You'd never know it, a known criminal showin up in homes to rape the feminen...
reknowned killer from the penile comin to clean up these freestyles with another style that just cant be beat,
Word on the street is, another cat just like me wants to battle when we meet, so he's talkin beef?
nah, there aint another mother fucker dumb enough to come and step to this mother... I'm the dirtiest mic crusher...
these hip hop drops wont stop till I cop a squat on a cop for writtin me tickets...
if you wrong me or cross me in any way, shape or form, your better fix it... or take a fat dick...
I'm made to cause hate and corrupt the face of the youth for all eternity...
there aint a maternity or any person who can stop my shit from blurrin the vision of a million mother fuckers yearnin to be heard,
So I'm takin authority....

lol... prob. wack as fuck cuz im tired as hell, but lemme know
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Old 09-04-03, 03:02 AM   #2
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shit that is aight for a newb
but i know who u r and u sure in hell aint no god damn newb but yeah that was strait
just an opinion
im out
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Old 09-04-03, 11:29 AM   #3
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sorry man, that shit was a bore.
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Old 09-04-03, 11:49 AM   #4
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ya dowg ur pritty good but u could use some work
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Old 09-04-03, 11:59 AM   #5
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aight, since i spit almost all multi's i can tell that u try for them a lil too hard, thus it really screwed up wat u were tryin to say, in tha end, it made tha flow borin and unwanting to read, jus don't try to make so many multi's and u should be able to make a betta flo...
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