aiyo,

I spit it straight forward, never holding back.
if you pull on my chords than i'll break em right in half,
cause all this tensions buildin up and I feel Ima bust,
till this shit starts kickin, I wont ever give a fuck,
see Im sick of all the shit that my dads tryin to pull,
revoke my fuckin license and I'll drowned you in a pool,
see I stick to my words cause its all that I have,
if I had a peaceful life, I would have to look at gats,
but nothing puts a grasp on the fact that I sacrificed everything I had to get to the level that Im at,
and your not about to brag that you brought my ass up,
cause I'd rip off your nuts and put you on the rag,
see, I'm 17 now, not a baby no more,
if I'm old enough to court, than I'm way more mature,
than you at my age so today Im writin more,
your wifes a fuckin whore and I hate her so bad,
if I ever get the chance, I'd kick your fucking ass... at first glance,
dont even have to ask, any hesitation made will just get your ass capped, I see you laughin now but yo know this...
I'm stingin like 50 hornets when pissed, dont come around me and turn your back on me BITCH!!!!!!!!!!

if I had a peaceful life, I would have to look at gats,
but nothing puts a grasp on the fact that I sacrificed everything I had to get to the level that Im at,

*looks around*
Eminem is here?

your wifes a fuckin whore and I hate her so bad,
if I ever get the chance, I'd kick your fucking ass

sound like another of his songs...

man im sorry i thought this was gonna be good, but i already bought the album

^^^fuckin herb, dont talk shit, unless you gonna say what album and song they are from then dont say shit, AT would never bite from EM who the fuck would be so stupid to do that???? FUCKING HERB you need to real 'realist'

hes not sayin he bit... hes sayin is "eminem here" like his skill and shit u fucking dumb bitch...
sorry for the freepost- but nice flow word play keep spittin

^^werd, anywho the flow was good, as was the wordplay and vocab, the topic was aight, and the content was ok.

I have to agree it woz a bit of a 'copy' of eminem's 'say goodbye to hollywood' but it did have some origional lines. Just keep tryin hard and make it more your own next time.

Peace xx xx

AIGHT...NOT BREAKIN THIS DOWN...IT WAS ON POINT, SHOWED EMOTION...DID WHAT YOU HAD TO DO....

BEST LINES WAS:

if you pull on my chords than i'll break em right in half,
cause all this tensions buildin up and I feel Ima bust,

AND....

if I had a peaceful life, I would have to look at gats,
but nothing puts a grasp on the fact that I sacrificed everything I had to get to the level that Im at,

keep droppin....peep my spit "let loose"....peace

THATS WHY HE REPORTED THIS IN I.R. FOR BITING YOU STUPID FUCKING PRICK, DONT TALK SHIT WHEN YOU DONT KNOW WHAT YOUR ON ABOUT

skillful. YES!

Original. NO!

^FREEPOST YES

ORIGINAL NO

lmao

LISTEN, ppl ,how the fuck u gon criticize someone on NOT BEING ORIGINAL

when he talking about PERSONAL SHIT????????

the fuck outta here wit dat original bullshit,

if a man is on some real shit, i feel dat, no doubt

good drop AT

keep em coming