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Old 09-08-03, 09:45 PM   #1
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one love. one mind

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Tha HOttes Thing out




One love, one mind…
Together forever, glorious lifetime…
Essence perished with eminence…
Everlasting presence of dominance…
Eyes as blue as the sea, smile lights up the skies…
My dream came true, like death to see you cry…
Angelic sheets, the clothes that soothe your soul…
Love to grow as a whole, for eternity and more…
My imagination couldn’t paint a greater picture…
Of me and you forever, a true love, for sure…
From that fateful May to now, not a day to regret…
And any sins I begot on you, may God, He forget…
Pain to me is to see you wince, see an impure glisten in your eyes..
And hope I realize you’ve evolved from God’s eyes, disciple through time…
To hear your words is to see verbs at their grandest…
Work through hell to see us retired in a grand mansion…
No reminisce of life’s pits and depths of sorrow and hurt…
Know that at our greatest lows, we’ve got each other’s souls…
To caress and impress the great love of two, together make one…
Passion as rare as the lonesome dove, two under God’s overwatching son…
One more time, may we seek each other through a heart’s kind…
Together forever, glorious lifetime…
One love, one mind…
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Old 09-08-03, 11:26 PM   #2
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Rb is sleeping again !~!!~
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Old 09-09-03, 12:01 PM   #3
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iight

not much to really say about it, there wasnt all that many faulters, but i didnt really feel it all that much, might just be me, but i didnt see anything, feel anything, just saw words.

your vocab is good so was your flow, those dont need to be touched again at all they were fine

it reminded me some what of one i once wrote, cause of the whole cirlce thing, how it started to same ended the same, even thou the middles were different ahwell

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