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Old 09-10-03, 11:26 PM   #1
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My Brother

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My Brother is my blood my life,

The only one I have, that's right,

A pain in the ass like no one would know,

Everytime i see him he asks me for dough,

He rolls with me to school and back,

Tracks up mud when he sacks the running back,

Brotherly love that's always there,

Even after we rip out eachothers hair,

Don't dare talk shit to my lil bro,

No on treats him like a lil hoe,

I get up and get in their face,

Lil kids tryin to be hard, what a disgrace,

Paste a picture for you to see,

Me and him are family,

What a calamity it would be,

if me and him lost our sanity,

Reality is me and him are true,

Brothers we are and you can't break through,

As tough as shit may get,

Me and him will never regret,

The crazy shit we do is quite legit,

Cuz me and him are tha shit.
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Old 09-11-03, 10:54 AM   #2
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yo, family IS tha backround to all things, and u put that into words that had a meaning, although u should've explained some of tha things u said, i got tha feel that he did things but i couldn't say that he does or not...
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Old 10-09-03, 09:48 AM   #3
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This writing is totally awesome. It explains the love from one brother to another. This was well worth the read and I will continue to post to your writings. By the way, brotherly love can never fade. It maybe put in the shade but it will never fade. F4L

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Old 10-09-03, 02:12 PM   #4
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this wasn't meant to be complex at all, stating what i feel. Also not meant to have emotion that much. Thanks for the replys keep uppin this for me
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Old 10-09-03, 02:15 PM   #5
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you kno jt i was totally feeling your x mas tree and beat feelings

this is different and im not sure if im feeling it
i mean the structure is the same
the look and appeal is as well
but for some reason i felt that it left me with a thought thats like *where did jt go?*

i unno tho i did get a weird vibe but always a pleasure to read ya peicees

please peep arisign from teh bottle
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Old 10-09-03, 08:30 PM   #6
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this is somethign from like when i first started on here, so i've elavated a bit, thanks for the replys i'll hit you up
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Old 10-11-03, 01:38 AM   #7
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Family is what matters the most. I would do anything for my family, and by reading this, it seems like it means everything to you too. Brothers can be pains, but because they are like that we love them even more.
I liked this post and I thought it was one of your better ones from what I have read. Keep up the good work JT. Keep them comin.
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