This is my first real work
Holla back

Listen to me and understand wuts written
Wipe your mouth, cause shit is what your spitten
Take at look at my bling necklace and my style
My freestyle is so tight, I coulda been battling rabbit in 8 mile
Instead im wasting my time on u, cant u see
My rhymes will have you scared like a cat up a tree
U might talk a lot of shit, but im the sand nigga
I aint a terrorist, i never even pulled a trigga
But as soons as I spit this verse, ur dead, and im the killa

Bitch don’t get all racist on me, cause if I was a terrorist
Then I would be diggin ur grave in the mid east with no hesitance
And I would be wearin my turban backwards with a rag
And fuck u up worse than me ripping this track
Youll end up presumed dead like Hussein in Iraq
Dot play with me cause if u was black
I would be tha police and like Rodney king, ill attack
I aint playin when I tell u this
Arabs got bigger dicks and just don’t give a shit
So when talk shit in my face, youre gonna get hit
Go a round with me and like Hollyfield youll get bit
Cause like a rattlesnake when I battle its venom when I spit

In this rap game, im the instigator
And I found out that u was a chronic masterbator
U cant get girls and u aint a thug
And Prostitution aint legal no more so ur outta luck
No one likes u no more, ur a loser fuck
Cause this rap game aint for u, u just plain "suck"
Ur caught between a rap giants hands (me) and ur stuck

I could win this battle here if I was baked
Cause ur freesyle got me believing u was lyrically raped
I can spit some Arabic flos and still score
Cause im from Jordan, we straight hardcore
Im gonna finish u off like I did to that whore
Begging me to stop screaming... no More
Ur just too slow, my freesyle is spit at a quick rate
I might be yung, but this battle is over, ur too late
wipe the tears and dont cry, accept defeat by an arabian, its fate
Cause like a chess game, i played u, and now its check mate

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not bad for a newbie, basic vocab, keep elavaten, some good punches...an multies...try to get some more complex ones...it'll help you write an make you think of more lines an shit..keep droppin man 1

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