Muthafuckas better duck cus i'm blastin/
Don't push your luck cus long you won't be lastin/
This rhyme might come off explicit in parts/
If you don't like it fuck you i'm shootin darts/
At just you or your whole muthafuckin crew/
I thought you knew that i don't give a fuck/
I spotted you and now your ship will get sunk/
One person on the boat or twenty it dont matta/
I'll spit the same version all day i'll hear the splatta/
Of twenty mc's bodies hittin the water hard/
So i hope ya'll can swim cus i'll bite like a shark/
You best be puttin your gear in park or spark/
The reefer to ease yourself cus when i release/
You will be propelled at least a good one hundred feet/
So take a knee/
You best just concede to me the victory/
Mc's that think they can rip me easily/
Must be fresh outta just gettin a labotamy/
I'll dog collar weak opponents just so you know this/
And if you act up then your gettin choked for your performance/
Throwin fists like a grown ass man throwin fits/
Knowing this you just better try and grow some tits/
Cus this man will never hit a lady in reality/
Lyrically i'll hit harder then a burger with a million calories/
The most recent female to feel hail pain from me/
Was an mc that goes by Comedian but she's more then funny/
She's mad lyrical you dummy so watch out for her/
Cus the shit she spits would get felt by your sister/
I rhyme at speeds that exceed a muthafuckin stop watch/
You don't need to ask cus it was me who shot ya//

some shit i tossed down a lil bit ago, anyone feelin this?

that was an alright spit...your first few bars i didnt really enjoy..but the last half was decent..good flow...up your vocab an try to elavate some more...all in all good drop..but i think you could have brought more out..later

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

yea lookin back on this, the first half was pretty fuckin weak, damn i gotta stop postin up old shit and just drop a new verse..

that was iight pretty good shit from newbie to newb you got talent