:.::.:::RhytmicTendicies:::.::.:
Welcome To The North Or Ireland, Guns Loaded...
Bombs Already Exploded, And Moral Eroded...
Constant Police Patrol, This Shit Is Outta Control...
Everyone’s On Life Parole, Increasing Death Toll...
We’re In Constant Fear, Danger Is Always Near...
Shed A Tear, For The Latest Casualty Of The Year...
Not A Career In Sight, Another Life Is About To Disappear...
This Is Another Hood, It’s A Constant Ethical Building Site...
You Don’t get An Invite, We Don’t get A White Knight...
To Save us From This Depression, With No Political Progression...
Aggression Towards Our Own Blood, Peace Is Outta The Question...
We Give Ireland A Bad First Impression, Are We Wrong...
Or Do We Just Express Our Feelings, Through This Song...
This Is Where We Belong, We Stay Morally Strong...
Keepin’ The Peace, Even Though Our Country Is Under Lease...

:.::..:::Potent:::..::.:
Britain...mutherfuckas

My birth place will stay the same..England..but my routes change
I guess our lifes are arranged by our locations to suit and pertain
Our names and the games we play and the way we say things
It pervades like the colour of our skin n give movement in limbs
It's our whim...
It's cynical of stereotypically england cuz no man eats crumpets
Nor sips tea and poshbitches, U.K rapper blew the fuck up lyrically
Britians been misleading everybody cuz our lives are a mysterery
Quickly get shirlock to solve it...
We roll wit dolls n dough and throws the bows and involve
Street ways, weaks don't stay, back in the day when we rolled
We invade whole nations and nothing changin except we evolved
Now lets resolve ways y'all perceieve usYou won't exceed us

::RhytmicTendicies::’Hook’
Welcome To, The Cities Of Rb’s Chosen Few...
Our Gun Ridden Towns, But So Beautiful Under Review...
This Is Where We Live, Our Cultures Goin Through A Sieve...
Streaming Outta Control, Our Cities Are Evil As A Whole...
But Can You Judge Us, By These Places Which We Play A Small Role...


:.::.:::Carsonjet:::.::.:
Yo its CJ Frontin Str8 from Boston, M to da A....
Da only Place Where Da Shor'Tays Give it Away...
Unda'da Seats Fronta Third Base At FenWay...
East Ireland-Southy B'-Chinatown-An little Italy..
Mama's At the clubs-Make ya feel'It Sicily.......
'rubb em titty's..We high class we drop'em 50'
Where else Can ya Rep But the celtic Bruin City...
Take the "T" cross the border for jus a quarter-
Wit Harvard in Town-We Filmin'all the Law & Order's-

:.::.:::RhytmicTendicies:::.::.:
Divided, With Innocent Children Politically Sided…
Paramilitary Style Beatings Are Reputably Provided…
We Got’s Johnny And Jerry Acting Like They Were Presided…
But Unfortunately Our Children’s Fate Is Already Decided…
Both Parties Destructively Collided, A Violent Collision…
Children With Short-sighted Vision, Only Seeing The Division…
Growing Up Only Wishing, That The Government Will Make A Decision…
This Is Violence live, You See The Danger A Soon As Your Arrive...

::RhytmicTendicies::’Hook’
Welcome To, The Cities Of Rb’s Chosen Few...
Our Gun Ridden Towns, But So Beautiful Under Review...
This Is Where We Live, Our Cultures Goin Through A Sieve...
Streaming Outta Control, Our Cities Are Evil As A Whole...
But Can You Judge Us, By These Places Which We Play A Small Role...

that was a hot callab...you'z really ripped it up...

Flow--was good
concept---was good
structure--was good
it was good lol

8/10 man...if yah have time hit up my "different tertorial flow" thanks peace man

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Secluded
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i was feelin it. the vocab was kool, the wordplay was aight, the content was good, as was the structure. ima rate it a 8.5/10. good collab, keep postin yall i enjoyed readin that.

this was a great collabo. n. ireland niggas slept on

^word...lol^

uppin'

YEH, i can't break it all down, but good reppin UK this was nice to see there is more ability, and nots all garage groups,

i think i prob understand it more being from manchester, my best lines was....

from POTENT...
My birth place will stay the same..England..but my routes change
I guess our lifes are arranged by our locations to suit and pertain

and...

It's cynical of stereotypically england cuz no man eats crumpets
Nor sips tea and poshbitches, U.K rapper blew the fuck up lyrically
Britians been misleading everybody cuz our lives are a mysterery
(SHITS SO TRUE....LOL)

RYTHMIC...
Divided, With Innocent Children Politically Sided…
Paramilitary Style Beatings Are Reputably Provided…
We Got’s Johnny And Jerry Acting Like They Were Presided…
But Unfortunately Our Children’s Fate Is Already Decided…
Both Parties Destructively Collided, A Violent Collision…
Children With Short-sighted Vision, Only Seeing The Division…
Growing Up Only Wishing, That The Government Will Make A Decision…
This Is Violence live, You See The Danger A Soon As Your Arrive...

SORRY MANS, both of your verses was fire...

and CARSON..probably felt these less overall:

Yo its CJ Frontin Str8 from Boston, M to da A....
Da only Place Where Da Shor'Tays Give it Away...
Unda'da Seats Fronta Third Base At FenWay...
East Ireland-Southy B'-Chinatown-An little Italy..

GOOD COLLAB THO...KEEP DROPPIN




PEEP MY SPIT "LET LOOSE".....PEACE

Damn man.....why did ya all steal my fucking idea?......Shit , ya all must come up wit ur own shit............Anyways this piece was tight , but I liked PT.1 better...............Rhythmic's verse was ill , hiss wordplay was sick.........The others were nice

^^steal ur idea....yeh thats why thugzdocry jus told me to drop 10 lines on my home town......

uppin'

Nice collab dawgs....Yall came nice, ....good strucured verse, .....concept was clear ....and not played,.....some good flow, in it....7,5/10

Props to all off u, .....peace...

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