Going indepth...this is potent reality science

Why do peeps hate?

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The Reality The reality of it

Yo i dont get this, here on rb ,.. u can only can have one drop a name..?????//
Is is hate?,this claim i state?is it rb just dont want potential cats to elevate?//
The haters on rb shud look in the mirror,..and reconsider before they fire hate//
Respectin others for tryin aint bad,being a legendary writer isnt everybodys faith//
Can we all plz have a little respect, for the people who are tryin so damn hard//
True allot of wannabe's,but olso,people wit love for this game All werent here from the start//
Just tryin to start look at people's drop, and dont think that it has to be a piece of fame//
Some cats really try hard, to express themselves tru some bars, to them this aint a so called game//

Young Grass Hopper Why do peeps hate?

Haters feel threatened there left second and hating the reality
Don't get it confused when you wronlgy accuse, i'll rape ya sanity
Hatings a calamity of sucess and happens to the best of us all
Reality is G's wraps pussy then haters are wipin dust of balls
Had none at all, thats not a down fall for us its a plus to winning
Initiating hate when we create literature stimulating for viewings
Intruding on territorys consuming fairy story so no more wardens
Only deal haters get is cheap air flights, down size n shortened
Only scorn on with slander and accusation and imitation of stanza
Stand 'ard like they are but really killed sales like they got cancer
I'ma land ya punches for hatin on me cuz i'm creating complexity
Your elating defeincy and hatin n loodin is all they do consistency
This is for all mc's who doubted me and downed me before i blew
Only found my screws after you had put em in me when i was new
Screw you...

That's all i gotta say, Nothin more notin less

that was good..i liked the concept an the way you made even bad rappers have some courage to try...it was agood 2 verses an flow wasa great...dcheck myn out man *different territorial flow* peaz

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The Weathers Art
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My Teenage Eyes
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Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
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hmm well rappin about haters is widely played.. but anywho this was carryed out nicely.. with a nice ending... i liked especially this bar

Intruding on territorys consuming fairy story so no more wardens
Only deal haters get is cheap air flights, down size n shortened

couldda been a lil more elevated with meta's n wordplay.. but overall i give it 8/10

nice

hot flow my nigga keep elevatin cuz


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